MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!

Name: jamlil (Signed) · Date: 09/12/12 10:50 · For: And When I Said I'll Take It
oh i loved this chapter. it was great. i realy want to know what James would do when vanesa tells him about Peter. is it realy about Peter?! i just think it might be. anyway update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter gives a pretty good hint about what was in the letter - and no, it isn't about Peter.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/11/12 0:03 · For: Cause When I Look Down
It looks like Peter is going to be a rat.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/10/12 22:48 · For: That Your Friends Would Forgive You
"Designed to ensure that those who work in the Ministry and serve the interests of the public do everything they can to further the ideals of our society and protect our heritage so that magical cultural can be passed along to our children."--clever wording of course threatening to burn down business doesn' exactly protect magicul culture does it?

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/10/12 22:32 · For: I Think You'd Find
In Harry Potter, Peter betrayed his friends because he was unwilling to sacrifice himself. Here he is betraying because his family is threatened, similar to what Luna's father did.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/10/12 22:22 · For: You Would Be In Some Good Company
Poor Peter, ever the weak one. One wonders why he didn't mention to anyone that he was being threatened.

I like the interaction of James and Vanessa. Were it not that you had put so many hint as to how James and Lily feel about each other, I could completely satisfied with this relationship.

Caradoc and Lily don't seem to have the honesty needed to be a couple. Right now Lily is holding back because she wants James to live up to her better expectations, (but she won't admit it)

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/10/12 11:38 · For: Just Give Up and Admit You're An Asshole
This was an excellant chapter. It tied up all the details from previous chapters in a coherant way.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/10/12 11:25 · For: You Actually Believe That They Are Real
Good chapter!

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/10/12 11:14 · For: Is That While You're Telling Me Stories
I was surprized that Lily acted this way after figuring out what was going on.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/09/12 22:42 · For: Is You Don't Know How You Feel
I found it surprising that Vanessa enjoyed the date.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/09/12 22:27 · For: What Bothers Me
I like Vanessa's character.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/09/12 22:08 · For: Is That You Believe What You're Saying
When I was reading this a second time, I wondered if Lanwick had an encounter with a werewolf that would explain her feelings.
I am curious if there might be a more rational explanation as to why Lanwick thinks Muggleborns don't get wizarding society other than just prejudice.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/07/12 15:49 · For: What Bugs Me
Good chapter. You use the characters to explain points of view and still be people.

Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! I hope you're enjoying the story so far.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/07/12 15:35 · For: But I've Got No Problem With That, Really
I like the direction this story is taking. You are taking the time to develop your characters.

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 09/02/12 20:07 · For: You Can't Hide Behind Social Graces
Had I known of the premise of this story, I would have started reading this story earlier. As it was, I saw you had 24 chapters done, so I thought I would give it a shot.

Name: jamlil (Signed) · Date: 09/02/12 19:16 · For: And Guess What? I Never Did
that was great.waiting for the next :)

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue.

Name: jamlil (Signed) · Date: 09/02/12 10:18 · For: You Can't Hide Behind Social Graces
it was great. specially the last part. update soon

Name: dragongurl (Signed) · Date: 09/01/12 3:22 · For: And Guess What? I Never Did
Yay, you're back!!! I was getting a little worried, but I'm happy to see that you haven't abandoned this story. :) And... SHE'S GONE!!! Sorry, I know you liked her, but now we can really get some Lily/James action. :) Thanks for another wonderful chapter!!

Author's Response: Sorry, I was out of the country for 5 weeks, and had very limited access to Internet. But I'm back home now, so you can expect more frequent updates until the end of the story.

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 08/31/12 17:43 · For: And Guess What? I Never Did
Yay for the update!! Fantastic chapter! Cannot wait for the next update :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue...

Name: jamlil (Signed) · Date: 08/27/12 19:36 · For: And I've Got No Illusions About You
hey there
what's happening. you haven't updated for a long time!!

Name: GhostPhoenix6287 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/12 4:54 · For: You Can't Hide Behind Social Graces
This is like my favorite story on here. I check everyday to see if you put a new chapter up!!! Cant wait till the next chapter!!!!!

You must login (register) to review.