Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 01/01/12 3:51
Chapter: Is That You Believe What You're Saying

This chapter is REALLY good! The internal battle Lily feels about the Wolfsbane potion and the external battle with the Healer is so real, I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I always figured things would be very different in the real world than they were at Hogwarts, and Lily wouldn't really be prepared for that.

Reviewer: Redwing
Date: 12/22/11 2:03
Chapter: What Bugs Me

Love it! This is a really great story. Please keep writing! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 10/25/11 20:18
Chapter: But I've Got No Problem With That, Really

Bum bum BUUUM!! Oh goodness, what has she gotten herself into? Poor Sirius. I hope he feels better soon. James is a git but there might be a cure out there for it somewhere, yes? Let's hope so 'cause he needs some STAT. ;) Great chapter, can't wait for a review! ^^

Author's Response: Thanks! Lily is going to find herself a little bit over her head with this one... and don't worry, James is quite bit more mature in the next couple chapters.

Reviewer: evoevoevo
Date: 10/20/11 4:30
Chapter: You Lie, to My Face of All Places

YAYAYAY!!! Good job! It's pretty good, and I'm finding the AU to be a breath of fresh air from the usual Lily falling in love with James 7th year story line. Furthermore, I like where it's probably (my guess) going. I'm looking forward to reading new chapters and seeing how the relationship between Lily and James starts. I'd also like to say that you're a great writer, however, I have three corrections: 1) It's Jane Austen 2) Charlotte Bronte wrote Jane Eyre and 3) Emily Bronte wrote Wuthering Heights
:)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story so far. I should have caught the mix up with the Brontes and the misspelling of Austen so thanks for pointing that out.

Reviewer: A Magical Muggle
Date: 10/13/11 4:53
Chapter: So Don't Try to Be All Touchy-Feely

This is really good so far! Interesting idea, and all of the characters are well written.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the idea.

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 09/25/11 13:50
Chapter: You Can't Hide Behind Social Graces

Good chapter! Can't wait for next one! Interesting too! I didn't read that it was altentive universe so I was a bit confused but I get it now. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, it is slightly AU, so things will be a little different than in the books.

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