Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 01/24/13 22:05
Chapter: Epilogue (part two): I Think This Is Good Enough

Love love love!!!!!! This story is so well written and so believable. I loved the way you wrote the characters and how they developed. It's been a long almost year since I began reading this story, but you never disappointed me once! I can't wait to see what else you write! Thanks so much for sticking with it. I have enjoyed every word. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the changes the characters underwent in the story. And don't worry, I always stick with my stories (even if it takes a really long time to finish them).

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/15/13 16:20
Chapter: Epilogue (part two): I Think This Is Good Enough

Haha, Great dialogue between James and Lily. Very entertaining and interesting :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/14/13 14:57
Chapter: Epilogue (part two): I Think This Is Good Enough

I thought this was an excellant story in spite of the bittersweet ending. I realize the ending is like that to show tha James has matured enough to accept (if only temporarily) things he can't change.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, the ending isn't a perfect happily-ever-after for everyone, but James and Lily have both matured enough to be happy with each other and try to make the best out of a bad political situation.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/10/13 13:49
Chapter: Epilogue (part one): When I Look Around

I am kinda sad that this story is almost over! I have really enjoyed reading each chapter you have posted and love how long each one is :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/03/12 15:55
Chapter: I Meant As Is (part two)

I really liked this chapter because it seems like Lily and James are growing to understand one another. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, James and Lily do understand each other now, as will be shown even more in the next chapter.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/03/12 15:42
Chapter: I Meant As Is (part one)

Ughh such a pleasant character we have in the form of Mrs. Lestrange. Nasty bit of work there.

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/13/12 18:50
Chapter: I Meant As Is (part two)

Aww short :(
Oh well, I like how Lily and James are getting really close now!
And what happened to Vanessa?
I think she got attacked by Firenze and is going to be a werewolf!
Excited for the next one,
-Livie

Author's Response: Thanks! I don't go into the details of what happened to Vanessa, so the attack is left up to your imagination.

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/05/12 22:47
Chapter: I Meant As Is (part one)

Eeeeeeee! Another exciting chapter!
What was in the Daily Prophet??
And what was on that sheet of paper??
Oh I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Livie

Author's Response: Thanks! I am purposefully leaving a bunch of things vague, so you might not get all the answers you want. But I think I am dropping enough clues for it to at least make sense in the context of the story.

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 11/05/12 22:47
Chapter: I Meant As Is (part one)

Eeeeeeee! Another exciting chapter!
What was in the Daily Prophet??
And what was on that sheet of paper??
Oh I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Livie

Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 11/03/12 9:59
Chapter: I Meant As Is (part one)

What's going to happen?!?!?! So much is going on right now and I cannot wait to see what it leads to! Thanks for the update and I'm glad to see you back. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is in the queue.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 11/02/12 10:59
Chapter: I Meant As Is (part one)

I don't know if good will win!!!

This is stressful.

Author's Response: Well... good doesn't always win in real life, so I guess it is a good thing that you aren't sure if it will win in my story, either...?

Reviewer: GhostPhoenix6287
Date: 10/28/12 16:50
Chapter: And When I Said I'll Take It

Oh my god i love this story. I loved this chapter especially though. I check every day for the next chapter i hope you update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue, so should hopefully be up soon.

Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 10/23/12 11:55
Chapter: And When I Said I'll Take It

You are the master of cliffhangers.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 10/22/12 23:34
Chapter: And When I Said I'll Take It

BuhBuhBuuuuuuuuh!!!
Omg cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, a cliffhanger. Which will be (somewhat) resolved in this next chapter.

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 09/18/12 23:36
Chapter: And When I Said I'll Take It

Not a cliffe!! Evil!!! Loved it though!! Please hurry with the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is waiting to be approved.

Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 09/17/12 21:15
Chapter: And When I Said I'll Take It

Oooooo!!!! Can't wait to see what James discovers and what it means for him and Lily! Great job!!

Author's Response: Thanks! James' discoveries are revealed (sort of) in the next chapter, and things are going to start looking up for the James/Lily relationship.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/14/12 21:32
Chapter: And When I Said I'll Take It

Ahh, I want to know soooo bad right now what the letter says! Cannot wait for the next chapter. Loved this one :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will hint at what is in the letter, but I am going to be leaving the details up to your imagination.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 09/12/12 23:19
Chapter: And Guess What? I Never Did

I am hoping James and Vanessa can still be friends.

Author's Response: James and Vanessa definitely still care about each other, but something is about to happen that might complicate things...

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 09/12/12 22:34
Chapter: I Miss All The Good Stuff

None of the problems your characters are facing have easy solutions. I like that you have taken the time to explain the complexity of the situation and why easy answers aren't always forthcoming.

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 09/12/12 10:50
Chapter: And When I Said I'll Take It

oh i loved this chapter. it was great. i realy want to know what James would do when vanesa tells him about Peter. is it realy about Peter?! i just think it might be. anyway update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter gives a pretty good hint about what was in the letter - and no, it isn't about Peter.

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