First, excellent title!
I like your writing style. I am also intrigued by your characters. This is shaping up to be pretty interesting.
Your story is very good . I can hardly wait to read more of it . please post soon . Thank you,Dennis
I honestly can't believe I'm the first one reviewing this story.
To me, it's fantastic so far, very well writen and paced! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.