Reviews For The Last Straw
Reviewer: FwooperFeathers
Date: 10/16/11 0:20
Chapter: The Last Straw

AWESOME! :D
I really liked the ending. It kind of ends openly, leaves you wondering what will happen next :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! -Ash

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/29/11 17:32
Chapter: The Last Straw

Very nice!! Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 09/28/11 12:32
Chapter: The Last Straw

Ash, this was really good! I loved that you put in James's view too. And the "welcome home" at the end was very sweet. = )

Author's Response: Andi, Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. We really need to catch up sometime! I miss you! -Ash

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/28/11 2:28
Chapter: The Last Straw

Ooooooh! Your first review!
I just wanted to say that this installment was truly inspiring. You described the characters so well that I actually visualized the entire chapter in my head. Thank you for such an enjoyable read.

Author's Response: Thank you for such a great review! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad I was able to make it visual for you. This story sort of came at me out of nowhere and begged to be written. It was all very clear in my head, and I'm glad that you could see it happening as well. Thank you again for your reviewing! -Ash

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