it was nicely written bt ya know the whole Harry Hermione thing bugs me :p
I don't really ship Harry and Hermione either, so when Al found out who Harry was actually having an affair with, I was shocked. Although I think it is highly unlikely for them to be having an affair, I think that Harry seemed in character during the exchange between him and Al. I liked this, though, it was an interesting twist.
This was disturbing but very well written.