There are some good characters in this story.
Dangit Teddy! I did not expect this from him! Anyways, I hate Cooper. He's stupid. Septimus and Sirius are my favorite characters, and I thought that Sirius must have felt very awkward being in the closet the entire time! :P
I don't usually like AU, but I can already tell that I love this story! It seems fairly lighthearted so far, but I just started it so I guess I'll have to wait and see what happens :)
Wow this is a fantastic story! Can't wait to read the rest of it!
The story is very good....but I have a question. Who are Nimbus's parents?
Author's Response: Scarlet Black from previous fics and Charlie Weasley.
Wow, only the first chapter and it's off to a brilliant start. I loved your last two stories and I thought you would be done- so you can imagine how excited I was to see you'd published something new! Your writing ability has definitely progressed through all you've written and this first chapter definitely showed that. There was just one thing that caught my attention and it was when you described her going into her vision of Scorpius falling off his broom. It was a bit unclear and i had to read that a few times to actually understand what it meant. I know you really like to use suspense and that aura of mystique in situations like that, but maybe you could've said something to imply that what she was seeing was not actually happening in the real world. What I did like is how you showed the future- I liked how the war is long over, but nothing's really perfect. The icing on the cake to that theme was when James tells Nimbus she could date a Muggle and Nimbus explains to the readers that even though the war was over and everyone says they wouldnt treat Muggles any different, they dont have any Muggle friends. Very realistic, but without being cynical, which is something I've come to love about your writing.
You're off to a great start on this one- I can't wait to read the rest of it.