Chapter 12 - Meet The Potters
Knowing Ginny's temper, I can't tell you with how much trepidation I opened this chapter. Although I wasn't surprised, it was lovely to see Lily fighting for her boyfriend. :') Also, YAY Lavender.
That said, I still understand why Ginny would be mad, given the history between her and Lucius.
OMP TIME FOR THE DELIVERY.
But do me a favour and stop the c***teasing.
Author's Response: the c***teasing? What do you mean? BABY ZABINNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII. hey, someone should run a book on the name ....
Chapter 17 - A Testing Time
Awesome chapter. This is really a great story and I love your character development. I especially like the growth that Scorpius has shown throughout the story. You've done a nice job of showing how his upbringing has affected his thoughts and perceptions, while showing him becoming aware that what he was told is not the necessarily the truth and figuring out the rest of the story for himself. You have also done a nice job with showing that the people on the winning side have their own prejudices and aren't any more accepting.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. It's been a traumatic hour when I accidentally deleted the whole story, but your review has helped me calm down. Thank you againa and I'm pleased you are enjoying the story. ~Carole~
Chapter 11 - Incriminating Evidence
Gods. A chapter starting with Ariadne screeching can't be good. >.>
“Eyeing up your boyfriend, Scorpy,” Ariadne remarked, panting slightly as she squeezed past him to get to her seat.
She knows what's up.
OH YES THEY KISSED IN FRONT OF EVERYONE BUT oops Ginny. :O
Author's Response: I think you're seeing things that clearly aren't there, dearie. Scugo? What is this word of which you speak? ~Carole~
Chapter 10 - The Great Escape
Chocolate Apple! Is that possible? I want one cause I love both. :)
I do love kissing Albus.
"Merlin, he’d never wanted a shag quite so badly."
Merlin, I've never wanted two characters to shag so badly!
OMFP TEDDY AND VICTOIRE ARE MARRYING.
I can haz more of Genister?
Hehe. Jokes aside, I LOVE the further development of character here. Scorpius starting to rebel against the elder Malfoys. Yes, I like that!
Also! OMP Albus and Scorpius spending a minute in each other's company and not wanting to hex each other off is a welcome relief.
Author's Response: yay, another review. Thankeeeeee
And you haven't mentioned Scugo. Are you coming around to the idea of Scily?
Chapter 9 - The Family Name
HAHAHA! Zabaglione! Lavender is hilarious.
I really hope Harry didn't reject Scorpius for real. That would be unfair, and not very Harry.
Benedict is shooting higher up in my List of Fav Characters in High. Perhaps, Ernie married Mandy Brocklehurst, that Ravenclaw.
Can Ariadne die in a fire?
I like the way you have written Zabini here, and you give a convincing portrayal of him as a decent professor and head of house.
Author's Response: Chapter 23 - Ariadne dies in a fire. - I'm writing it now.
Chapter 8 - Our Own World
:/ I like the fact that Scorpius loves his family, but if he ever finds out what his grandfatther did, it isn't going to be pretty. :/
I hate Ariadne with a frightening passion.
Dying at "My Sweetheart".
This Natalie doesn't seem to be good at advice, like me ...
Author's Response: Between you an me, that Natalie is a scarily mad. Mind you she's also very smexy, so I put up with the delusions. ~Carole~
Chapter 7 - A Magic Show
Although a very eventful chapter, I have only one thing to discuss in this review:
That is all. Moving on to Ch 8.
Author's Response: He prefers his snake getting slithery with someone else
Chapter 6 - Sky as a Kite
Cootes turned out to be a prick. Oh welllll. But yay! This means those two can get together now. :D
I do hope the relationship between Scorpius and Albus improves in later chapters. It would be nice to see that happen while they are still at school.
Heloise... I like that name...
Author's Response: The name Heloise came to me in a dream. I really am very inventive, aren't I? *dodges hex* Cootes is a prick, I agree. ~Carole~
Chapter 5 - Burst the Clouds
LMFAO. I am slowly falling in love with Scorpius.
No, actually, make that rapidly.
He has the perfect sense of humour! Dying at "constipated pig". Dying, I tell you!
Also, YAY for Blavender. I have read your Lavender fic - just never reviewed it out of laziness hehe. Ok! Now I have to know what happens in the Ball, and if these two will make it up!
Author's Response: They might make up ... you never know.
Chapter 4 -Kitten as a Cat
First of all - OH MY PRONGS. My name is Natalie! Wow. I am going to go along with the delusion that I am part of this exciting story!
So many things happened! Scorpius is so deliciously cocky. ;) And I loved seeing Harry and Ginny, in spite of the awkwardness. Lol.
I am undecided about Vaisey - he seems a true blue Slytherin. I hope he'll get more development in the later chapters.
And OH! I forgot to mention this in my last review. Pustule Pips. It sounds strangely familiar ...
Author's Response: OOOh Pustule Pips, yes my beta thought that one up. She's a bit delusional, but I love her.
Chapter 3 -Smitten as That
Ohhh! We're welcoming more characters.
Okay, starting from the top - Astoria. She is very different from the way I write her, but she seems really fun, bitchy, cunning and loving, which is fantastic for post-war Draco. (I don't like Ariadne, btw.)
Rose. OMP. Hahaha! She is terribly snobbish here, but Benedict seems good for her. You know, for a moment, I thought you were going to turn the fic into Scorpius/Hugo. I personally ship those two and allusions (intentional or not) deeply amuses me.
Will go to Ch 4.
Author's Response: Scorpius Hugo - you mean Scugo? Heaven forfend! I like Astoria, too. And I'd rather like to get into bed with Benedict ... tni, I know.
Chapter 2 - Sticky as Lips
Oh wow! I love Teddy here. I hope Victoire will show up later - I ship them. :)
Okay, Harry Cootes. Hahaha! That was hilarious, and I do like Lily's owl's name. I also think there is a lot of chemistry between Scorpius and Lily here (although I will never completely defect to this pairing :) ) Don't mind! Actually, I'd love to beta this fic for you, if you haven't finished it yet.
I am going to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: My beta is very mad. She might not let go of this fic despite being totally delusional in her pairings. *giggly snort* ~Carole~
Chapter 1 -Flying High
I really don't ship Scorpius with anyone, unless it is one of Ron and Hermione's kids. However, your story seems quite interesting. What draws me to it is Scorpius' characterisation. I hate it when people make him so vanilla. This way, it is much more believeable He can sting!
Lily with an apple? That's actually ... wow!I drew Lily with an apple once. Your fic reminded me of that.
Anyway, just wanted to say I am enjoying this and will stick around for the rest. Hey! You have other chapters posted as well. *goes to read*
Keep them coming!
Author's Response: I love you, SO. FREAKING. MUCH. Lily with an apple, perhaps it will start a trend. I've never heard of Scorpius with Hugo. Sounds ghastly. Thank you. Come again. ~Croll~