Reviews For High
Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 10/26/11 4:32
Chapter: Chapter 20 -Fantastic Days

That was a really funny one!
You need to write more chapters!!!!!
You're a really good writer and I'm really enjoying the story!
Keep writing- please?

Author's Response: There are, I'm afraid, only two more chapters of this story. One is written and ready to go (I'm having problems with the blooming formatting on the boards) The other is in progress. However, I will probably write some oneshots which are compliant with this, and have recently had a thought about something fore focused on James and Scorpius (not as a couple). So, although High is nearly over, their stories haven't quite ended for me. Thank you so much for all your reviews. Once I get the coding stuff fixed, I'll get the next chapter posted.

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 10/26/11 3:48
Chapter: Chapter 19 -Where There's A Will

No Victorieis really funny!
Only three more chapters? D:

Author's Response: I like Victoire as well. Yes, only three more chapters, but spin offs probably.

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 10/26/11 2:31
Chapter: Chapter 17 - A Testing Time

Poor Scorpius!
It would be so hard to have a childhood like that! Plus he remembers it all! That would be horrible!
Poor Scorpius, now I feel really bad for him!

Author's Response: I feel sorry for him, too. But he has Lily and Teddy in his life now. ~Carole~

Reviewer: Celinda
Date: 10/24/11 16:30
Chapter: Chapter 3 -Smitten as That

This is lovely! I like how Scorpius reminds me of Draco, while Lily is a fresh breath of air (a nice change from all the Dramione I read). I don't have time to write a longer review, because I have to get to the next part, so I'll just say great job!

Author's Response: Thank you. Scorpius is a bit like Draco, I agree, but he has a lot of Astoria in him as well. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. ~Carole~

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 10/24/11 5:05
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Breaking In

Why were there those weird question marks?
And why was there the really big space at the end of the chapter???
Oh and this story is starting to make me really hate the malfoys but then really like Scorpius. I mean it's not his fault!!!


Author's Response: There's a formatting problem on MNFF that affects me when I edit. I am loathe to go in and correct the space at the end in case it cocks it up even more. I have mentioned this is the summary, but hope it didn;t ruin the enjoyment of the chapter for you.

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/23/11 13:39
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Legacies

Oh, I see now. That's why Ginny was acting that way...I wonder what the next chapter will be, but great chapter, as always!

Author's Response: Yay, you got to it. She's not quite as nasty as Scorpy thinks ... hee hee. Glad you're enjoying this and I hope your exam revision went well. ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/22/11 1:44
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Meet The Potters

I don't know why but I love the Lavender in this story more than the original one in the books.
I'm not quite fond of Ginny in this chapter than the original books, though.
Still, I really love this story! :))

Author's Response: Lavender in the books is a bit annoying, basically because she acts like most teenage girls who have their first serious boyfriend. In fanfiction she's perpetually cast as a fluffy-headed idiot and neatly forgetting that she was part of the DA and fought at the Battle of Hogwarts. I have a story called Lavender, blue - A Gryffindor true, which is compliant with this. You might like it (It's Profs rating though, the sexual situations are more full on)

As for Ginny, this is from Scorpius POV, so he sees only the prejudice she has for him. Now, I don;t think her opinion is valid, but I can sympathise with her because of the things she's been through. Plus the Weasleys are quite a prejudicial bunch at times (not so much Arthur). Ginny will hopefully become more Ginny from the books like as you read on. Thank you so much for the review. ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/22/11 1:19
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Incriminating Evidence

I didn't think this could get any better!! Oh, can't wait to read the next =))))))

Author's Response: Thank youuuuuu. I hope you enjoy the rest. ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/22/11 0:47
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Great Escape

Yay! Love the ending!! Couldn't stop smiling!!
"Parents can be so bloody embarrassing at times."--TOO RIGHT!
Love this chapter! My favorite, so far! And I love that Albus agrees with Scorpius on something :D

Author's Response: YES! Finally Scorpius and Albus agree about something. Thank you so much for the review. ~Carole~

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 10/20/11 3:59
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Our Own World

No Comment

Author's Response: Ohhh, why not?

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 10/20/11 2:48
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Sky as a Kite

You know I think Lily is kinda a b**** for being all mean to Scorpius then suddenly being all 'Oh Scorpius!' and trying to get him back.
But other wise... Good chapter :)

Author's Response: Um, well, she had just found out that he was using her (or so she thought, and she's not entirely wrong about that). Lily's angry with him and not a doormat, plus she's getting pressure from her family and ... hmm, Scorpius isn;t entirely innocent. Hee hee - glad you liked it. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Um, well, she had just found out that he was using her (or so she thought, and she's not entirely wrong about that). Lily's angry with him and not a doormat, plus she's getting pressure from her family and ... hmm, Scorpius isn;t entirely innocent. Hee hee - glad you liked it. ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/19/11 21:45
Chapter: Chapter 9 - The Family Name

This is simply just getting better and better! You're an incredible writer, I just couldn't stop reading this every day! I hope they'll be out in the public soon :D

Author's Response: Ohh, hmm, which chapter are you at? - Ha! Thankyou very much for the review and the compliments. I love this pairing rather a lot. ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/19/11 12:16
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Our Own World

This is really the most different yet the most captivating Scorpius/Lily story I've ever read! I'm so glad I've found this story! Every chapter seems to be getting better than the last and there are just loads of new stuff that you kept putting that I'm getting - I couldn't even think of the right word! I'm really getting more and more caught up here :)

Author's Response: Yayyayayayayayay - thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying this story because it's been a lot of fun to write. I'm nearly at the end, though. *sob* ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/19/11 11:13
Chapter: Chapter 7 - A Magic Show

I absolutely love the dueling part...and Scorpius' sly remarks...but the ending part...I'm itching to read what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Thank you ... read on ... but you have exams! ~Carole~

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 10/19/11 1:45
Chapter: Chapter 4 -Kitten as a Cat

Poor scorpius!!!

Author's Response: Well, he probably deserves it - ha ha. He is a bitof a git at times. Thank you ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/18/11 21:25
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Sky as a Kite

I'm getting more and more engrossed in this story! And I should've been focusing on my exams today...

Author's Response: ooops, get on with your exams! Actually, chapter ... um ... 17, I think, is about exams ... Good luck and thank you for reading. ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/18/11 12:08
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Burst the Clouds

I want Lily and Scorpius back...but great chapter, by the way. I really like Teddy's random appearance. :)

Author's Response: well, there are a few chapters to go, so perhaps they won't be apart for long ... Teddy might very well crop up again ... randomly. Thank you for reviewing. (I like your user name, btw. It's cool) ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/17/11 21:48
Chapter: Chapter 4 -Kitten as a Cat

Ugh, I don't know how come Al was such a prat here...Anyways, I hope Lily and Scorpius will come around soon. I just simply love the pair of them together =)

Author's Response: Okay, bear in mind that this is all from Scorpius' POV and they've never liked each other. Albus is a bit of a prat but Scorpius isn't entirely blameless. ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/15/11 3:01
Chapter: Chapter 3 -Smitten as That

I couldn't help grinning at Scorpius' comeback at that Edgecombe! Ha! And hey, I really love their comments about the different Houses! Especially the sneaky Slytherins and chivalrous Gryffindors, :D

Author's Response: Slyths are just quite sexy really - HA! Thank you for the review. ~Carole~

Reviewer: crimson and gold
Date: 10/15/11 2:33
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Sticky as Lips

I really like Teddy's appearance in this chapter :)
And I love the way you phrased those lines about prejudice. Too right, prejudice exists on both of their sides.
I like your writing style and I'm looking forward to seeing more 'quote-like' lines on the next chapters...and sorry, I'm such a poly-reader that I tend to read different stories at once that's why it took me this long to read and review this chapter :)
This is great, by the way! I love it! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm a poly-writer - I work on several things at once. I'm glad you like Teddy because he turns up again at various stages of the story. ~Carole~

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