Oh, I see now. That's why Ginny was acting that way...I wonder what the next chapter will be, but great chapter, as always!
Author's Response: Yay, you got to it. She's not quite as nasty as Scorpy thinks ... hee hee. Glad you're enjoying this and I hope your exam revision went well. ~Carole~
I don't know why but I love the Lavender in this story more than the original one in the books.
I'm not quite fond of Ginny in this chapter than the original books, though.
Still, I really love this story! :))
Author's Response: Lavender in the books is a bit annoying, basically because she acts like most teenage girls who have their first serious boyfriend. In fanfiction she's perpetually cast as a fluffy-headed idiot and neatly forgetting that she was part of the DA and fought at the Battle of Hogwarts. I have a story called Lavender, blue - A Gryffindor true, which is compliant with this. You might like it (It's Profs rating though, the sexual situations are more full on)
As for Ginny, this is from Scorpius POV, so he sees only the prejudice she has for him. Now, I don;t think her opinion is valid, but I can sympathise with her because of the things she's been through. Plus the Weasleys are quite a prejudicial bunch at times (not so much Arthur). Ginny will hopefully become more Ginny from the books like as you read on. Thank you so much for the review. ~Carole~
I didn't think this could get any better!! Oh, can't wait to read the next =))))))
Author's Response: Thank youuuuuu. I hope you enjoy the rest. ~Carole~
Yay! Love the ending!! Couldn't stop smiling!!
"Parents can be so bloody embarrassing at times."--TOO RIGHT!
Love this chapter! My favorite, so far! And I love that Albus agrees with Scorpius on something :D
Author's Response: YES! Finally Scorpius and Albus agree about something. Thank you so much for the review. ~Carole~
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Author's Response: Ohhh, why not?
You know I think Lily is kinda a b**** for being all mean to Scorpius then suddenly being all 'Oh Scorpius!' and trying to get him back.
But other wise... Good chapter :)
-Livie
Author's Response: Um, well, she had just found out that he was using her (or so she thought, and she's not entirely wrong about that). Lily's angry with him and not a doormat, plus she's getting pressure from her family and ... hmm, Scorpius isn;t entirely innocent. Hee hee - glad you liked it. ~Carole~
Author's Response: Um, well, she had just found out that he was using her (or so she thought, and she's not entirely wrong about that). Lily's angry with him and not a doormat, plus she's getting pressure from her family and ... hmm, Scorpius isn;t entirely innocent. Hee hee - glad you liked it. ~Carole~
This is simply just getting better and better! You're an incredible writer, I just couldn't stop reading this every day! I hope they'll be out in the public soon :D
Author's Response: Ohh, hmm, which chapter are you at? - Ha! Thankyou very much for the review and the compliments. I love this pairing rather a lot. ~Carole~
This is really the most different yet the most captivating Scorpius/Lily story I've ever read! I'm so glad I've found this story! Every chapter seems to be getting better than the last and there are just loads of new stuff that you kept putting that I'm getting - I couldn't even think of the right word! I'm really getting more and more caught up here :)
Author's Response: Yayyayayayayayay - thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying this story because it's been a lot of fun to write. I'm nearly at the end, though. *sob* ~Carole~
I absolutely love the dueling part...and Scorpius' sly remarks...but the ending part...I'm itching to read what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Thank you ... read on ... but you have exams! ~Carole~
Poor scorpius!!!
Author's Response: Well, he probably deserves it - ha ha. He is a bitof a git at times. Thank you ~Carole~
I'm getting more and more engrossed in this story! And I should've been focusing on my exams today...
Author's Response: ooops, get on with your exams! Actually, chapter ... um ... 17, I think, is about exams ... Good luck and thank you for reading. ~Carole~
I want Lily and Scorpius back...but great chapter, by the way. I really like Teddy's random appearance. :)
Author's Response: well, there are a few chapters to go, so perhaps they won't be apart for long ... Teddy might very well crop up again ... randomly. Thank you for reviewing. (I like your user name, btw. It's cool) ~Carole~
Ugh, I don't know how come Al was such a prat here...Anyways, I hope Lily and Scorpius will come around soon. I just simply love the pair of them together =)
Author's Response: Okay, bear in mind that this is all from Scorpius' POV and they've never liked each other. Albus is a bit of a prat but Scorpius isn't entirely blameless. ~Carole~
I couldn't help grinning at Scorpius' comeback at that Edgecombe! Ha! And hey, I really love their comments about the different Houses! Especially the sneaky Slytherins and chivalrous Gryffindors, :D
Author's Response: Slyths are just quite sexy really - HA! Thank you for the review. ~Carole~
I really like Teddy's appearance in this chapter :)
And I love the way you phrased those lines about prejudice. Too right, prejudice exists on both of their sides.
I like your writing style and I'm looking forward to seeing more 'quote-like' lines on the next chapters...and sorry, I'm such a poly-reader that I tend to read different stories at once that's why it took me this long to read and review this chapter :)
This is great, by the way! I love it! :D
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm a poly-writer - I work on several things at once. I'm glad you like Teddy because he turns up again at various stages of the story. ~Carole~
Hey, I couldn't stop smiling by myself while reading this! It's really good! Only the beginning, and yet, it seemed to fill me with loads, already! :D
I'm almost one hundred percent sure I'm not going to regret continuing reading this. Anyway, this is the first fanfiction I read on mugglenet, because I've been reading and writing on fanfiction.net ever since. I'm really glad I came across this story (and this site), because I've also been writing a Lily/Scorpius story on fanfiction.net. I don't usually read a Lily/Scorpius story because I tend to mix it up with my own...Anyway, I don't post stories here, yet, and I assure I won't grab your own ideas on mine :)
Great job, by the way! I'm looking forward to more awesome chapters! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I tend not to read other Scorpius/Lily stories either, just in case it skews my own. So, thank you for reading. I hope you don;t regret reading because this is almost finished. I have a chapter to post and a chapter to write and then it's done (which has made me quite sad *sigh*. LONG LIVE SCORPIUS/LILY! ~Carole~
I get that. They want to ride his broomstick >,
Author's Response: Thank you ~Carole~
Sweet
-Livie
Author's Response: Thank you. ~Carole~
That's funny it all deep with them kissing and then out of nowhere 'Wow!'
I just couldn't stop laughing!
-Livie
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. ~Carole~
I am nodding fervently in agreement with your chapter notes. LOL.
Carole, I think you know how much I <3 this story. It's everything everyone said it would be, and the fact that I read 119-odd K in four days should tell you that this is one of your best stories so far. I'm favouriting it and (although this may sound selfish) I'm kind of glad I started reading it now because if I didn't, I'd have to wait for updates. And that kills me already with AA and Lions *hint hint*
I still don't ship Scily, but this story has brought me close to that. Basically, the story's wonderful, so are you, and you'd better update soon. Or else... I'll cry.
~Soraya~
Author's Response: ch 21 will soon be winging its way to Natalie, worry not. And then after the last chapter and 2 other things I have a plan for Lions which involves November! ha ha - thank you so much for all the reviews. Much appreciated. ~Carole~ Oh, and there could well be a spin off or two with this.