Reviews For A Single Step
Reviewer: ThaliaEuphrosyneMuse
Date: 11/21/04 4:08
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Sweet. I liked your descriptions of Hermione and Luna, especially their laugh. "Go out into the deepest recesses of the world, grab the darkness by the throat, and drag it back into the light."- a good advice to everyone, deep.

Reviewer: Hermyohnee
Date: 11/14/04 10:44
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Excellent piece of literature. That's all there is to say about it. Anything else (well even that) is an understatement

Reviewer: stardust
Date: 11/08/04 0:20
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Seren, this is a fantastic vignette! Together, Luna and Hermione are always fun. The plot and message were both nice, and I liked the bits of humor, as well (Luna dancing in acid green toe socks, lol). You have real talent!

Reviewer: Isla142
Date: 11/06/04 3:06
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Hey! An excellent fic, Seren! For once, Hermione and Luna team up and help Harry see what he is. Hermione must have really been controlling herself. But Harry did need Luna to help him do it. I don't think he'd have decided to help Graham if only Hermione had gone down. Keep writing! But you might want to get a beta reader. I spotted a few mistakes. And can I write the sequel? Mantolwen and the Weasley kids.

Reviewer: rupertgsnum1fan
Date: 11/02/04 4:22
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

That was really good, Seren! Very nice. Luna is awesome! XD Can't wait to see more of yours! The other ones I've read are really good as well ;)

Reviewer: PhoenixWrath
Date: 11/01/04 16:20
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

I thought that was a well written story with a good moral. You definitely have a good sense of description, and I am a bit of a hard reviewer, so take it as a compliment! I thought Harry sounded a tad Hermione-ish at times, but it was hardly enough to matter. Nice work!

Reviewer: blazing_axe
Date: 11/01/04 12:31
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Well done. On a technical note, should One-shots be considered "Completed?"

Author's Response: Yeah, but I didn't have a way to put in completed...odd....

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