Reviews For A Single Step
Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 04/29/12 21:59
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

I like how you related this back to that quote, which is super-famous. In case you're wondering, I'm on a mission to read and review every story on the archive, so I figured I'd start at the back. I hope this brings back some memories! Very well done!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/29/07 14:37
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Why is it that everything Luna says, once thought about, makes sense? I love her character. You've completely dashed my hopes for my alternate universe self though, I hoped she'd know friendship, love and success. Oh well, thats what dreams are for. Anyway, loved this fic!

Reviewer: RockinBaby
Date: 04/06/07 17:27
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

I swear the music I'm listening to is making every story I read 1000 times better.

And this was already very well written, just multiply it by 1000.

Thats super amazing (:

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 11/12/06 11:55
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

That was beautiful, it really was. *sigh*

Reviewer: vikkidragon
Date: 09/04/06 21:56
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

This is beautiful.

Reviewer: mudblood_724
Date: 09/04/06 0:13
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

excellent story! it was very well written.

Reviewer: RagingStorm71117
Date: 09/03/06 16:20
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

:) That was beautiful. The image of Hermione and Luna standing side by side - and dressed the way they were - is incredibly amusing and well-written. And the thing Hermione and Luna teach him is incredibly powerful and very well done.


Reviewer: butterflykisses
Date: 07/25/06 23:23
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

That was absolutely masterful. Words seem to just flow out of you! The imagery is so real and alive...I feel like I'm there.

Magnificent job. I really enjoyed this,

Reviewer: 180goddess hotline
Date: 05/20/06 23:22
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

love the story, love the philosophy, love everything. You know its so hard to find storys that are truly original. But is this really original? its just a different way of looking at life. Its refreshing.

Reviewer: phoe_gurl
Date: 04/15/06 5:08
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

this is amazing!!! you really captured their characters in this story, you're writing is so cool.

Reviewer: FanficWriterNikki
Date: 03/18/06 16:53
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

I really thought this was excellent. You gave terrific descriptions, so I could picture everything in my mind. I really enjoyed the friendship between Hermione and Luna. I haven't seen a lot of fics that include that friendship, but you write it beautifully. I also loved how you wrote Luna. She is one of the more difficult characters to write, but you did it wonderfully. This story was truely terrific.

Reviewer: melie
Date: 12/10/05 21:14
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

i had such a typical girly reaction. i went "awwwwwwww" and started bawling. eventhough you are a full time mod, please try to update your stories, because that is what people do when they love somehting. 4000/10

Reviewer: HPotter7
Date: 09/03/05 13:23
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

This was a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. Luna and Hermione couldn't have been written more wonderfully. 10/10

Reviewer: hpfannaticalltheway
Date: 06/30/05 7:19
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

"you do the right thing because you want to." I really liked this line, I felt like it ws true how people rarely do this. I like to think that I do the right thing most of the time, but it's because I feel obligated to do so. I want to change my attitude, now after reading this story, so that I do the right thing because I want to.

Reviewer: Friday The 13th
Date: 04/10/05 19:38
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

One word, beautiful. As always.

Reviewer: Ashwinder
Date: 02/18/05 18:58
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Very nice. I like how you lent a fairy tale atmosphere to this by having Harry describe Hermione and Luna as the "two prettiest girls in the Kingdom." You further reinforced the image with the crowns each girl made.

I like the contrast in the girls. You emphasised this in the description of their laughter. Luna appealed to Harry's emotions while Hermione appealed to his logic. I especially liked what Luna said about Harry needing to stop being the Boy-Who-Lived and start being the Boy-Who-Lives. What an apt observation.

I caught one spelling mistake in the beginning: adventerous should be adventurous.

Reviewer: School owl
Date: 01/30/05 19:46
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

You are a wonderful writer. Good job.

Reviewer: Masked One
Date: 01/16/05 20:51
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

I love the way you portray Luna. You manage to capture her rather difficult personality perfectly. I also liked the little things you mentioned about who was doing what on the Hogwarts grounds at night, and the way you mixed mirth and seriousness into the conversation between the friends. This scene really rings true, as though it could actually happen in the HP world--good job!

Reviewer: Lovely Fatima
Date: 12/29/04 22:15
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Beautiful. Your settings are well crafted, as is your pace of dialogue. I also liked how many other people wander about the school at night. Well written.

Reviewer: Darth Voldemort
Date: 12/04/04 18:31
Chapter: N/A (One-Shot)

Very good, very true to life. I liked it a lot.

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