Reviews For Epithalamium
Reviewer: Lost_Robin
Date: 06/18/12 17:28
Chapter: Eighty Seven Days: Sweeping Misconceptions

Cormac in the closet! Oh my. It must have been fun getting him out. Sorry for the bad joke. Great as usual and sorry I haven't reviewed before.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Cormac in the closet, indeed, couldn't happen to a nicer guy.
-N-

Reviewer: ajruss7
Date: 05/31/12 1:31
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

cant wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter will feature Harry and Ginny alone (apart from Kreacher) –N-

Reviewer: Seedy
Date: 05/24/12 5:19
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Continue!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will. -N-

Reviewer: witch1561
Date: 05/18/12 8:10
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

A chapter I've enjoyed - I like this story very much though I'm sure it's not easy to write. Jocasta was a great character to see them through, even though she's awful.

Lucky Ginny getting the dress she wants first try! I don't think you've done badly (not that I know all that much about dresses) - I've got a ball dress that shape and it's beautiful, and not too hard to walk in. Getting it fitted wasn't much fun though - will you show Ginny's fittings in later chapters?

Kitty

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Kitty.
Not easy! I've never had to do this much research for a single chapter. Jocasta was fun to write.
I doubt whether there will be any more about the dress until the wedding day. Perhaps a ppassing mention or two, but it was difficult enough for me to write this without writing the fitting. That's well outside my experience.
-N-

Reviewer: GinevraPotter00
Date: 05/18/12 0:42
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

This is my favourite chapter so far! Great chapter but I'm afraid I have to nitpick.'wear a little different' should be 'we're a little different'.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. As for your nitpick, I couldn't find it. perhaps what I really need to do is pur "" around "Jocasta's Bridal Wear"? -N-

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/18/12 0:29
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Another great chapter, i didn't see any fashion problems but of course I am a male too so I don't suppose I could help.

Author's Response: Thanks. Fashion and style is always dangerous territory. -N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 05/18/12 0:18
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

I loved this chapter!!!

I have gotten behind reading your amazing works (lets just say an interesting April ended up with my car catching fire from some mulch that ingnited from a cigarette butt).

Hoping to be caught up soon!!!
Edyeb

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Edyeb
Sorry to hear that, but at least it's merely proprty, not people. Glad you liked this, and I think you have some catching up to do. I had missed you :-)
-N-

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/18/12 0:04
Chapter: One Hundred and Three Days: Press Here

What a fun story, I hope part of this tale will include some fond remembrances of Ron and Hermione's wedding, other then breakfast.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is (I admit) my least planned story. It's more a series of themed shorts than a novel. It will include the stag and hen nights, I know that. Otherwise - we'll see. -N-

Reviewer: Brennus
Date: 05/17/12 20:03
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Great story, as always from you. So how do you know so much about dresses? You are starting to worry me now...

Author's Response: I was beginning to go crazy, and worry myself. But thanks to this newfangled worldwide interweb thingy, you can actually find out stuff. And some of it is even accurate. :-D -N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 05/17/12 19:25
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Wow Neil you never stop amazing us!
Plots, characters, excitement, now fashion!
What a nightmare, Ginny, Hermoine and Luna in the same shop.
Brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you.
I only hope that those nice people at Google don't let anyone see what I've been searching for over the past couple of weeks. Wikipedia gave me the basics (contemporary Western Wedding Dress). But then I had to figure out what the terms all meant. A-line, Empire, Trumpet? Blimey!
Ginny, Luna and Hermione were easy in comparison.
-N-

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 05/17/12 18:55
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Neil, this is wonderful! :D I love the wedding plannings. This chapter was lovely, and I did laugh out loud at Luna. I think the dress is really pretty, and I do like the idea of the green-and-white combination :). And Ginny's shoulder injury- due to a bludger, I expect?

I'd leave a larger review, but I've got my Bio A level exam tomorrow, so I'll run, hehe. Once again, awesome story, can't wait to see updates! --Nadia

Author's Response: Thanks Nadia.
Luna is a great character and she can always lighten a story. The dress took me far to long to decide fiigure out. I've had the basic structure of this chapter for weeks. It was always the damn dress which was the problem! I'm glad you liked it. Ginny was, indeed struck by a Bludger.
Good luck in Biology.
-N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 05/17/12 18:43
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Aww! Adorable. Dress shopping is always fun. And Hermione and Luna make it interesting. Each time I went prom dress shopping, I bought the first dress I tried on. Of course, I had tried on other dresses, but always went back to that first dress.

Cheers! :)
-Katie

Author's Response: Thanks Katie.
"Dress shopping is always fun!" Seriously? I hate shoping for clothes, and so does my girl. She was absolutely no help to me with this chapter. The dress stuff was all research. I know nothing.
-N-

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 05/17/12 15:35
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

What a great chapter, and story for that matter. I love the interaction between the girls, though through another's eyes. Luna is a true Ravenclaw, question everything! =) I'm grateful that Ginny saw through the snotty shop owner and went with the more down to earth Sandra. Can't wait to see more of the wedding plans, or any of your other stories. I am always exiced when I see a new addition to anything you write posted!
~Cherise

Author's Response: Cherise, Thanks for the review.
This entire chapter is nothing more than interaction between the girls. I only need to add Luna to the mix to turn everything sideways. Jocasta was heading for a putdown from the second she called Ginny Virginia. Next, possibly Strangers, More likely Hunters and Prey, and an outside chance of a new Mark/Lavender story.
-N-

Reviewer: kheldar
Date: 05/17/12 15:34
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

What a surprise to see this story updated! It's one of my favorites, and as usual you didn't disappoint!

Author's Response: It surprised me, too. After months of lying unfinished, I took a plook at it, and instead of tinkering at it and giving up (again) I finished it. -N-

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 05/17/12 15:10
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

excellent as always!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: tutifrooti
Date: 02/26/12 2:33
Chapter: One Hundred and Three Days: Press Here

very well written...can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 01/23/12 2:37
Chapter: One Hundred and Three Days: Press Here

Nice to know that Harry and Ginny do have some friends in the press.

Would love to see the picture of H & G smootching.

Also love how your story additions are overlapping so closely---whether by design or its just happening that way.

Can't wait for more!!!

Edyeb

Author's Response: Currently in the queue is a Ron/Hermione (with added Draco) Valentine’s day story called Conceptions. Next will be either: The Badly Fitting Coat (a missing moment from Grave Days), or The Professor and His Landlady (about guess who?), or Strangers Chapter 12 (Baking Buns, a Bike, a Breakdown and a Barmy Blonde), they are all close to completion. -N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 01/23/12 2:36
Chapter: One Hundred and Three Days: Press Here

Nice to know that Harry and Ginny do have some friends in the press.

Would love to see the picture of H & G smootching.

Also love how your story additions are overlapping so closely---whether by design or its just happening that way.

Can't wait for more!!!

Edyeb

Author's Response:
Edyeb

Harry and Ginny’s “friends in the press” are not above manipulating the couple to improve sales of Harpies products.

Sometimes a chapter of one story gives me an idea for something else. As my timeline is now fairly well fixed (do you want to know the date of Michael Corner’s wedding, and who he marries?) I can move up and down it with a reasonable amount of confidence.

-N-

Reviewer: Siriuslyloveblack17
Date: 01/20/12 23:32
Chapter: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait to read more of it. I really like how your able to keep the characters true to who they are right down to the unique way they avoid confrontation between two women making an argument over simple concepts that drive the men insane. I really look forward to reading your other stories as well as they dominate my favorites. Write On! =)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This is a story which will update when I get inspiration for the next chapter. I loved writing the Molly/Ginny argument. I think they are very similar people, and neither arthur nor Harry are foolish enough to intervene.
I'm not sure what story is coming next, but I have a Ron/Hermione one-shot in the queue.
-N-

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 01/12/12 18:50
Chapter: One Hundred and Three Days: Press Here

I loved this!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. -N-

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