Reviews For Epithalamium
Reviewer: ginnymoi89
Date: 11/28/12 18:08
Chapter: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

i am new here and jux happened upon this site i love your fics. The way you managed to capture harry and ginny's romance is so beautiful because in the books it was always overshadowed by ron and hermy's bickering. Thank you for such beautiful stories and please complete this one i'm hooked

Author's Response: So good you reviewed it twice? -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 06/19/12 15:22
Chapter: Eighty Seven Days: Sweeping Misconceptions

Surprise! I wasn't expecting this story to be updated, but I was happy that it was! This chapter was really good! Lavender suggesting the magazine idea was great. Of course, there would be so many different articles about Harry and Ginny. It's rather clever to see them sort through the articles.

Looking forward to reading more of any story! :) Cheers!
- Katie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This story (or series of wedding-relatted one-shots - I'm not sure what it is) will be updated when either I get the idea, or (like this one) someone makes a throwaway remark in a review and it sparks an idea.
Next (and soon) moore Strangers.

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 06/19/12 12:28
Chapter: Eighty Seven Days: Sweeping Misconceptions

Wow, wow and wow! Please update. And wait, what happened to updating your other story?

Author's Response: Thanks.
Not sure when you'll see the next chapter of this. Brown was completed and approved a few days ago. The next chapter of Strangers at Drakeshaugh is imminent and the next chapter of Hunters and Prey is with one of its betas.

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 06/19/12 11:55
Chapter: One Hundred and Eleven Days: Plan, What Plan?

Weasley Sprog!!! :D

Author's Response: It’s a perfectly good word, though not one Molly approves of :-D

Reviewer: Lady_Rayne
Date: 06/19/12 3:25
Chapter: Eighty Seven Days: Sweeping Misconceptions

Lovely story! Found a typo, thought I'd share:
We only won because we’d finally listened top his advice, apparently.

Should be:
We only won because we’d finally listened to his advice, apparently.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and for letting me know. I’ve fixed it. –N-

Reviewer: kheldar
Date: 06/18/12 21:16
Chapter: Eighty Seven Days: Sweeping Misconceptions

I think my favorite writing of yours is when you're writing Harry/Ginny - you capture them so incredibly well, particularly their dry sense of humor (especially Harry's). It was one of my favorite things about the books, and is one of the many reasons why I love your fics!

Author's Response: Thank you
I try to keep Harry true to himself. He’s been through a lot, but he’s remarkably resilient and his humour helps to carry him through, and not simply in the face of adversity.

Reviewer: ginevra_molly_always
Date: 06/18/12 17:40
Chapter: Eighty Seven Days: Sweeping Misconceptions

Brilliant. You had me in fits of giggles!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. That was the plan :-D -N-

Reviewer: Lost_Robin
Date: 06/18/12 17:28
Chapter: Eighty Seven Days: Sweeping Misconceptions

Cormac in the closet! Oh my. It must have been fun getting him out. Sorry for the bad joke. Great as usual and sorry I haven't reviewed before.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Cormac in the closet, indeed, couldn't happen to a nicer guy.

Reviewer: ajruss7
Date: 05/31/12 1:31
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

cant wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter will feature Harry and Ginny alone (apart from Kreacher) –N-

Reviewer: Seedy
Date: 05/24/12 5:19
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress


Author's Response: I will. -N-

Reviewer: witch1561
Date: 05/18/12 8:10
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

A chapter I've enjoyed - I like this story very much though I'm sure it's not easy to write. Jocasta was a great character to see them through, even though she's awful.

Lucky Ginny getting the dress she wants first try! I don't think you've done badly (not that I know all that much about dresses) - I've got a ball dress that shape and it's beautiful, and not too hard to walk in. Getting it fitted wasn't much fun though - will you show Ginny's fittings in later chapters?


Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Kitty.
Not easy! I've never had to do this much research for a single chapter. Jocasta was fun to write.
I doubt whether there will be any more about the dress until the wedding day. Perhaps a ppassing mention or two, but it was difficult enough for me to write this without writing the fitting. That's well outside my experience.

Reviewer: GinevraPotter00
Date: 05/18/12 0:42
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

This is my favourite chapter so far! Great chapter but I'm afraid I have to nitpick.'wear a little different' should be 'we're a little different'.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. As for your nitpick, I couldn't find it. perhaps what I really need to do is pur "" around "Jocasta's Bridal Wear"? -N-

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/18/12 0:29
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Another great chapter, i didn't see any fashion problems but of course I am a male too so I don't suppose I could help.

Author's Response: Thanks. Fashion and style is always dangerous territory. -N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 05/18/12 0:18
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

I loved this chapter!!!

I have gotten behind reading your amazing works (lets just say an interesting April ended up with my car catching fire from some mulch that ingnited from a cigarette butt).

Hoping to be caught up soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Edyeb
Sorry to hear that, but at least it's merely proprty, not people. Glad you liked this, and I think you have some catching up to do. I had missed you :-)

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/18/12 0:04
Chapter: One Hundred and Three Days: Press Here

What a fun story, I hope part of this tale will include some fond remembrances of Ron and Hermione's wedding, other then breakfast.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is (I admit) my least planned story. It's more a series of themed shorts than a novel. It will include the stag and hen nights, I know that. Otherwise - we'll see. -N-

Reviewer: Brennus
Date: 05/17/12 20:03
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Great story, as always from you. So how do you know so much about dresses? You are starting to worry me now...

Author's Response: I was beginning to go crazy, and worry myself. But thanks to this newfangled worldwide interweb thingy, you can actually find out stuff. And some of it is even accurate. :-D -N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 05/17/12 19:25
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Wow Neil you never stop amazing us!
Plots, characters, excitement, now fashion!
What a nightmare, Ginny, Hermoine and Luna in the same shop.

Author's Response: Thank you.
I only hope that those nice people at Google don't let anyone see what I've been searching for over the past couple of weeks. Wikipedia gave me the basics (contemporary Western Wedding Dress). But then I had to figure out what the terms all meant. A-line, Empire, Trumpet? Blimey!
Ginny, Luna and Hermione were easy in comparison.

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 05/17/12 18:55
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Neil, this is wonderful! :D I love the wedding plannings. This chapter was lovely, and I did laugh out loud at Luna. I think the dress is really pretty, and I do like the idea of the green-and-white combination :). And Ginny's shoulder injury- due to a bludger, I expect?

I'd leave a larger review, but I've got my Bio A level exam tomorrow, so I'll run, hehe. Once again, awesome story, can't wait to see updates! --Nadia

Author's Response: Thanks Nadia.
Luna is a great character and she can always lighten a story. The dress took me far to long to decide fiigure out. I've had the basic structure of this chapter for weeks. It was always the damn dress which was the problem! I'm glad you liked it. Ginny was, indeed struck by a Bludger.
Good luck in Biology.

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 05/17/12 18:43
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

Aww! Adorable. Dress shopping is always fun. And Hermione and Luna make it interesting. Each time I went prom dress shopping, I bought the first dress I tried on. Of course, I had tried on other dresses, but always went back to that first dress.

Cheers! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Katie.
"Dress shopping is always fun!" Seriously? I hate shoping for clothes, and so does my girl. She was absolutely no help to me with this chapter. The dress stuff was all research. I know nothing.

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 05/17/12 15:35
Chapter: Ninety Eight Days: A Dress

What a great chapter, and story for that matter. I love the interaction between the girls, though through another's eyes. Luna is a true Ravenclaw, question everything! =) I'm grateful that Ginny saw through the snotty shop owner and went with the more down to earth Sandra. Can't wait to see more of the wedding plans, or any of your other stories. I am always exiced when I see a new addition to anything you write posted!

Author's Response: Cherise, Thanks for the review.
This entire chapter is nothing more than interaction between the girls. I only need to add Luna to the mix to turn everything sideways. Jocasta was heading for a putdown from the second she called Ginny Virginia. Next, possibly Strangers, More likely Hunters and Prey, and an outside chance of a new Mark/Lavender story.

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