Reviews For Wine Untasted
Reviewer: fatimaahb
Date: 09/18/13 21:09
Chapter: Breaks Silently on Tower and Hall

ahhh I can't put into words what emotions I was going through while reading this story. you are a briliiant writer! this had me rolling with laughter, slapping my thighs kinda uncontrollable laughter! I love the way you portrayed everything, you are so good I felt as if I was reading a real novel cause of the excitement that was building up inside me! ugh please please please write more!

Reviewer: ndbit
Date: 04/01/13 21:11
Chapter: Breaks Silently on Tower and Hall

great story. lookig forward to more.

Reviewer: snaperocks
Date: 03/09/13 19:47
Chapter: And Jagged Brazen Arrows Fall

Haha I really liked this chapter!
The quidditch match was hilarious! Fabian is so funny and I love his comic releif. hahaha
Draco finally flying was so well done. When he wiped his eyes and pushed back his hair and Hermione stared at him I thought it was because she found him crazy for not repelling the rain. Then you said she looked away and her cheeks were red...so I was like dying and I was like OMG this is like the rain scene from Pride and Prejudice (I'm referring to the movie here lol one of my favourite scenes)! So when I read the first line of the next chapter I died because I was like noooo wayyyy too much of a coincidence haha
Then again the awkward conversation lol I thought was fitting but don't blame me for being a dramione fan and wanting more exchange of words lol...I'm sure it'll come in the later chapters.
And once I figured out Tovey's intentions it was so funny. I'm sure this part wasn't meant to be, but it was funny, and interesting.

Reviewer: Allieireann
Date: 02/11/13 21:01
Chapter: Breaks Silently on Tower and Hall

L.O.V.E! So glad you're back to writing. It's been too long. The tension between them is great! And I always love Fabian!

Reviewer: DragonFlower90
Date: 02/11/13 3:49
Chapter: Breaks Silently on Tower and Hall

MOAR!!!!! seriously, you're doing great. keep it up!

Reviewer: oddsocks
Date: 01/17/13 4:59
Chapter: The Sky is Laced with Fitful Red

Thanks for updating. The story is moving along!

Reviewer: Allieireann
Date: 10/30/12 22:21
Chapter: And a Long Wave of Yellow Light

I have really missed your updates.

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 09/11/12 16:01
Chapter: And a Long Wave of Yellow Light

HI, i've really enjoyed the fic so far and hope that you consider uploading the next chapter within the next week (because i'm incredibly
impatient!)
I hope you don't stop halfway through this fic like many others have, i get very frustrated!!!
good luck with your writing
beaflower114

Author's Response: I highly doubt the next chapter will be up anytime soon, to be perfectly honest. I've written a good bit of it but I am a very slow writer at the moment because I have a fulltime job. I'll finish it eventually, but you might think about not reading works in progress. I never do because I hate when people abandon stories in the middle as well. Glad you are enjoying it thus far. Cheers!

Reviewer: Fiona Wydler
Date: 08/16/12 7:04
Chapter: And a Long Wave of Yellow Light

Hi! I have been looking for a good post- Hogwarts fic and I think I've found just the one!

I absolutely love your writing! And being a fan of fics portraiting new characters (especially the well-written ones) I fell for Fabian almost instantly! (The fact that he's Irish has nothing to do with it...)

Well done so far! Thank you for sharing it with us. I'm really looking forward the next chapters.

F.W.

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 08/10/12 22:12
Chapter: And a Long Wave of Yellow Light

Ok, so first of all i love this fic so far and hoping that you will soon post the net chapter!!
beaflower114 x

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 05/07/12 21:50
Chapter: And a Long Wave of Yellow Light

Loved the update! I like that we got a little more insight into the bar scene and into Draco's thoughts.

Reviewer: oddsocks
Date: 05/06/12 12:42
Chapter: The Sky is Laced with Fitful Red

Good writing, and Il ove Fabian!

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 04/21/12 0:05
Chapter: Athwart the Feathers of the Night

This fanfic is really intriguing! I'm interested to see where this goes!

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 02/20/12 2:04
Chapter: The Sky is Laced with Fitful Red

I was quite excited to see a chapter was added! Great update! :)

Reviewer: Allieireann
Date: 02/05/12 5:52
Chapter: And Jagged Brazen Arrows Fall

I've enjoyed reading so far. Draco seems a little more mellow than I would have thought, even with changing after the war. Hoping to see some snide, witty arguments between him and Hermione! Love Fabian's outrageousness :) looking forward to chapter 6

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 01/30/12 3:06
Chapter: And Jagged Brazen Arrows Fall

Great story! Can't wait to see how the interaction progresses between Draco and Hermoine!

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 01/21/12 21:33
Chapter: Like a White Lady From Her Bed

Ok, I looooove Fabian!! I'm in theatre and I have many gay friends. You write Fabian as though he stepped right out of my group of friends. Great job! : D

Reviewer: snaperocks
Date: 11/29/11 10:34
Chapter: The Sky is Laced with Fitful Red

wow im actually really interested in this story!
its something different...like ive never seen a plot like this before you know?
I like how you introduced us to the characters before intertwining their lives. I liked that snape's tiger lily represented lily potter...i think how they met could have been written better. I also don't think you should have made The Burrow a less exciting place. I like the humor at the end of chapter 3 as well, and the introduction of the mysterious Fabian. I think you write wonderfully, and in the 1st chapter I felt like you write like Jane Austen. Do you take inspiration from her? At times I felt the writing was a bit pedantic, but who cares right? It's a really good story so far with a promising plot and an amazing author :) I don't like stories where the author makes many grammar, spelling, syntax errors. So I actually really appreciate your writing. I'm excited. Good job and good luck :)

Author's Response: I appreciate your comments. I always feel like someone saying my story is unique is one of the best compliments I could receive. I wanted their meeting to just be awkward and uncomfortable because I felt like that was the most realistic approach. Sorry if you felt I made The Burrow less than exciting, but I after what that family as been through I honestly feel like it would be. And Jane Austen is one of my favorite authors, so I am fangirling over the comparison. Overly detailed is just how I write, blame it on having an English degree, but I feel like the more detail there is the more lost you can get in the story. My priority above all is always proper canon and grammar, so thanks for noticing.

Reviewer: Natajess
Date: 10/12/11 19:20
Chapter: The Circling Mists and Shadows Flee

Very nice build up with these two chapters. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Balletto
Date: 10/09/11 15:08
Chapter: The Circling Mists and Shadows Flee

Cant wait for more!

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