Reviewer: LoonyLupin
Date: 12/30/11 23:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love Andromeda because she stood up for what she believed in, and you gave us a look into her mind. I love it so far :) Keep it up!

Reviewer: Sarcasm-Oh Joy
Date: 12/27/11 6:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

(Hey look it's that crazy girl who reviewed Out of the Darkness!)

I did like it! Thank you for asking. I love Adromeda's characterization. It was what I had always imagined her like, stubborn, strong, curious, inquisitive. Her thoughts are funny and sarcastic, which I like(coughpennamecough). It's so nicely written and I'd love to see where you take off from here. The others' stories and happily ever afters, or Andromeda's own? Excellent job as always! :D

Reviewer: StarkidSkyler
Date: 08/24/11 21:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

I was really impressed when I read this- you could tell that you put quite a bit of thought and effort into the backstory behind all of it, which can be difficult when writing about a slightly obscure character. I really like you're writing style (and I tend to be a little critical of first-person narrations just by default). All in all, bravo! I'll be looking for the next chapters!

Reviewer: locanena
Date: 08/24/11 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

nice

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