Wow---very good. Extremely emotionally charged. One of the better stories I've read recently. Great job! :)
Author's Response: You're too sweet to say that! I like my writing, but it's always nice to hear (or, rather, read) people say the same thing.
Wow. Emotional, kinda strong short but i enjoyed it. I've writen a dark poem called a dark hour i'd love you views on it. great job keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Sorry it took so long, my computer was down. I'd love to read your poem and give you my views on it. Thanks for your review as well. It was an emotional experience writing Ron's death, even though it was done in answer to a challenge by my friend.