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Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 11/27/11 7:08 · For: Chapter 3: Allies or Friends
Excellent and awesome as always!!! Love this look into boggarts of slytherins!!!!

Name: The Dark Lords Right Hand (Signed) · Date: 10/16/11 21:08 · For: Chapter 2: The Heirs Return
I suppose we can forgive the time length due to 9000 words of an amazing story. ;)
I was sort of hoping that it would be Snape who picked them up from the orphanage, but I think it worked better with Dumbledore, and I found it very amusing to picture Salazer obeying orders and heaving crates of drink around all day.

Author's Response: Glad you like. :) The trio will be heading into the Chamber of Secrets next chapter so stay tuned in.

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 10/16/11 20:02 · For: Chapter 2: The Heirs Return
Have I said I loved this series yet? I LOVE THIS SERIES! I'm am sorry that Gara died though! Can't wait for more!!

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 10/16/11 18:54 · For: Chapter 1: Unrequited Love

Name: The Dark Lords Right Hand (Signed) · Date: 09/17/11 14:14 · For: Chapter 1: Unrequited Love
An amazingly written chapter with some really touching moments, coupled with the usual funny ones. I can completely imagine Snape setting an essay where only a third of the information is in the book, and I'm predicting that his dating conditions could lead to some rather large arguments later. I loved that fact that he revealed his love for Lily to Destiny, as it links us back to the parallel story that Rowling wrote. There were a few typos and gramatical errors though.

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 09/02/11 19:01 · For: Prologue: The Youngest Death Eaters: Year Three
Oh i have been waiting for that for a long time!!! Love it!!!!

Name: The Dark Lords Right Hand (Signed) · Date: 08/28/11 2:03 · For: Prologue: The Youngest Death Eaters: Year Three
Brilliant, not only do we get the start of the third book, but a bit more to their past. However, I prefered the previous two stories in third person, as the characters don't seem to hold quite the same intensity in first person. However that could just be due to it seeming wierd after so long in anoter perspective!

Author's Response: Don't worry, this prologue is the only part that is in the different perspective. The rest of Year Three will resume in third person like the others. When I first wrote the Prologue I thought about starting Year Three will Salazar waking up as if he was in a memory dream. This is not what happens but that's why it is wrote differently. Hope you like the rest of year three though.

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