Reviewer: Peridot
Date: 04/15/13 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part Two
Update!! Please! Or at least put in your profile if you are planing to continue or not. Love the story, by the way
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/19/12 19:27
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part Two
Fantastically brilliant as always!
Reviewer: divadime
Date: 11/19/12 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part Two
This story continues to be an excellent example of originality/creativity and character complexity and development while never losing the ability to continue to draw us in. I eagerly anticipate each new chapter, and I believe the work you produce is accomplished and exemplary. Thank you for sharing your skill with the world, please keep up the great work :)
Reviewer: annangel
Date: 10/07/12 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part One
I love the story, it's really good!!! Please keep writing! These long waits are killing me!
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/28/12 18:27
Chapter: Chapter 9: Friendly Advice -- Part One
Fantastic as always!
Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 05/05/12 20:14
Chapter: Chapter 8: Nighttime Flying
This story keeps getting better and better! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/04/12 17:33
Chapter: Chapter 8: Nighttime Flying
brilliant as always!
Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 04/01/12 20:26
Chapter: Chapter 7: Childhood Is Calling
Can't wait to see what happens with Sal and Destiny! I love the way you have written this story without really changing any of the events in the book. It's so great and I cannot wait until the next chapter!
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 03/13/12 3:22
Chapter: Chapter 7: Childhood Is Calling
WOW! On every level possible WOW!! Can't wait for Severus to find out what the real deal with the boy was and WOW! Love silver in this chapter! The depth and complexity of your characters is amazing! Love it!!
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 02/24/12 2:01
Chapter: Chapter 6: Scales, Feathers, and Fur
This is probably one of your best chapters to date! I was mesmerized!! Great job!
Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 02/04/12 23:32
Chapter: Chapter 5: Hated and Neglected
Finally found some time to read the latest two chapters, and they're just as amazing as ever. Wizard's truth or dare would be seriously amazing, and I'm glad we found out a bit more about Drake. There hasn't been something random about Snape for a while though, I still crack up laughing thinking about him with cookies!
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 01/17/12 23:41
Chapter: Chapter 5: Hated and Neglected
I really like Drake! All the characters are great and I love how you have evolved them all!! It's a process that shows no sign of ending and that keeps me tuned in to see what's next!!! Great job!
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 12/29/11 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 4: The Heart Matters
Great! Love it! And I love someone finally pointing out that Ron and to an extent Harry can be as prejudice as the others!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that I'm not the only one who wanted that to be pointed out. I wasn't sure if people would like that, but I thought it was truthful. Plus, I wanted to have a moment when Hermione said, "Oh, honestly ..." :)
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/27/11 7:08
Chapter: Chapter 3: Allies or Friends
Excellent and awesome as always!!! Love this look into boggarts of slytherins!!!!
Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 10/16/11 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Heirs Return
I suppose we can forgive the time length due to 9000 words of an amazing story. ;)
I was sort of hoping that it would be Snape who picked them up from the orphanage, but I think it worked better with Dumbledore, and I found it very amusing to picture Salazer obeying orders and heaving crates of drink around all day.
Author's Response: Glad you like. :) The trio will be heading into the Chamber of Secrets next chapter so stay tuned in.
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/16/11 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Heirs Return
Have I said I loved this series yet? I LOVE THIS SERIES! I'm am sorry that Gara died though! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/16/11 18:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Unrequited Love
EXCELLENT!!!
Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 09/17/11 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: Unrequited Love
An amazingly written chapter with some really touching moments, coupled with the usual funny ones. I can completely imagine Snape setting an essay where only a third of the information is in the book, and I'm predicting that his dating conditions could lead to some rather large arguments later. I loved that fact that he revealed his love for Lily to Destiny, as it links us back to the parallel story that Rowling wrote. There were a few typos and gramatical errors though.
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/02/11 19:01
Chapter: Prologue: The Youngest Death Eaters: Year Three
Oh i have been waiting for that for a long time!!! Love it!!!!
Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 08/28/11 2:03
Chapter: Prologue: The Youngest Death Eaters: Year Three
Brilliant, not only do we get the start of the third book, but a bit more to their past. However, I prefered the previous two stories in third person, as the characters don't seem to hold quite the same intensity in first person. However that could just be due to it seeming wierd after so long in anoter perspective!
Author's Response: Don't worry, this prologue is the only part that is in the different perspective. The rest of Year Three will resume in third person like the others. When I first wrote the Prologue I thought about starting Year Three will Salazar waking up as if he was in a memory dream. This is not what happens but that's why it is wrote differently. Hope you like the rest of year three though.
