Reviews For Over the Next Year
Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 08/20/11 20:59
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tears and Turkey

I really like your story so far,especially he Ron and hermione parts! keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it!

Reviewer: bee13
Date: 08/20/11 9:00
Chapter: Chapter 2: Rightful Places

Aw Professor McGonagall's just awesome. Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks! gotta love mcgonagall!

Reviewer: cmbluey98
Date: 08/19/11 23:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tears and Turkey

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this was cute

Author's Response: thanks! : )

Reviewer: locanena
Date: 08/19/11 15:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tears and Turkey

OMG I was in tears, good story. I can just picture Hermione and Neville doing just that, checking Harry to see if he was still breathing. Beautiful just beautiful.

Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Ascendio
Date: 08/19/11 12:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Tears and Turkey

Oh, that was very sweet. First off, I'd like to applaud you for keeping Ron and Hermione in character, for I think it's one of the toughest pairings to write, and they sitll stayed very much in character during their little moment.
One little thing is during the, "They all stood with heads bowed and the reality of the situation crashed against them all again." It's good that you mentioned this, but however I think I'd play just a LITTLE more into it.

I really like how you had them check on Harry, it seems likely that Hermione would want to keep a very close eye on him after everything. Also nice how you have characters like Ron using Voldemort's name.
Also great to have Dumbledore commending Ron and Hermione. They have truly beem immensely brave and fantastic friends.
This would work well by itself as a one-shot, but I see you have it as chaptered. I'm interested to see how the rest will play out.

Author's Response: thanks for the detailed review! i'm glad you thought ron and hermione were in character, that was my goal. as for the "reality of the situation" bit, keep reading, because i'll definitely be playing more into that in chapter five, when we get to the funerals. glad you seemed to enjoy it overall, i hope you like the rest!

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