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Name: kpdoney1 (Signed) · Date: 10/22/13 19:51 · For: The Visitors
Some advice is to add a bit more Harry and Ginny perspective to these stories, I love the muggle perspective but I think using both would make the story even more interesting, also I hope you don't just lose Henry and Annie once the potters go to "boarding school"

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This particular story is almost entirely from Harry’s perspective. As for Henry and Annie, I have plans for them both.

Name: kpdoney1 (Signed) · Date: 10/20/13 21:46 · For: The Visitors
Wonderful story, I love seeing harry being a kind dad and so forth, Great writing and amazing characters in both this and the first story. If your thinking about writing more in this time period a cool idea would be for Henry to get accepted to Hogwarts, and this is possible because we do know their family has had some amount of magic in their blood and sometimes people just happen to have magic without relatives with a lot, (Muggleborns) , Keep on writing :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I seem to write a lot of stories about Harry and Ginny as parents of young children, and I certainly enjoy writing them. There will be more. Others have suggested that Henry should be magical, too. While I don't like to disappoint readers I decided a long time ago that neither Henry not Annie would be magical, sorry. Making them magical would be fun, but it would also give me an easy future for them, and I want to make things more difficult.

Name: SoGranola (Signed) · Date: 03/21/13 23:46 · For: The Dragon
Saucy. ;) I really like reading about (your) Harry & Ginny as parents. Another thumbs up from me.

Author's Response: Saucy? You haven’t read Spontaneity yet, have you? -N-

Name: Chocolate butterbeer (Signed) · Date: 03/17/13 17:02 · For: The Dragon
Very cute I love Harry in this story he's such a great dad. liked the reference to the triwizard tournament very creative. plz update strangers at drakeshaugh!!!

Author's Response:
Harry is shown to be a great dad in the epilogue, though his storytelling skills are still developing.
You’ll see Hunters and Prey before you see Strangers, sorry.

Name: Ruchira_M (Signed) · Date: 07/03/12 14:39 · For: The Dragon
Pretty impressive accidental magic there! Children can be a little cruel to each other at times, isn't it?

Author's Response: Thanks. They can, indeed, and their reacions can be spectacular. -N-

Name: Ginnypotter2699 (Signed) · Date: 12/18/11 6:50 · For: The Dragon
It's ok. I like strangers at drakeshaugh better.

Author's Response: :-D At least this is finished! -N-

Name: Spyder_Angel (Signed) · Date: 12/14/11 16:49 · For: The Drakestone
Great story, it was really well written! I was just a bit confused in the second chapter because in the beginning, Lily was talking more childish, saying "Wiwwit be siting, Mummy?", but a bit later on, her speech seemed to have matured quite a bit when she said "Come here, boys, Daddy’s going to tell us a new story..." I was just wondering if she was meant to speak like an older child or a younger one. Besides that, I loved it, and I can't wait till you finish Strangers.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and thanks for pointing that out. Lily is very young, and should sound it. I'll try to take a look at that over the weekend. I'm working on the next chapter of Strangers now. -N-

Name: Shreeja (Signed) · Date: 11/09/11 20:19 · For: The Dragon
It's a lovely sequel. I have been waiting for more at the Drakeshaugh, and this helps a little. I love how you have brought out the characteristics of each child perfectly. Harry is a loving and doting father and Ginny could very well be a younger Molly Weasley. Waiting for more at the other fic. Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I tried to make the kids individuals, I'm rather fond of Henry at the moment, because he's far from perfect. But we can't choose out children's friends.
Harry was a doting father in nineteen years later, which is the key to my attempts to characterise him. There is certainly a lot of Molly in Ginny, but I hope that there's a bit of Arthur, too.
"Strangers" chapter 10 (Conversations and Invitations) is in the queue.

Name: juniper (Signed) · Date: 11/06/11 0:27 · For: The Visitors
I love all your stories, but looking forward to your finishing the other one!
You must be a father to write so well :)
I hope you read this to your kids!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
More “Strangers” soon, and more Moons and A&S too.
I plead guilty to fatherhood, and to reading to my kids. But I've never read them my own fanfics.

Name: minervassister (Signed) · Date: 11/03/11 20:05 · For: The Dragon
Loved the dragon!
You must be a great dad Neil to be able to write with such insight.
Thanks for another lovely story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review
Me? Great? The consensus seems to be - silly! There are worse things to be, but thank you. :-D

Name: edyeb (Signed) · Date: 11/02/11 22:25 · For: The Dragon
Cute chapter!!! ;)

I really enjoyed when James realized Al's power.

I was expecting some kind of response from Henry, but can't wait to see if Annie does anything unsually on her outing with Lily.

Of course part of that would be the fun in how the Lily (or any of the kids), describe their new friends doing magic to Harry and Ginny,,, or maybe Jaqui and Mark???


Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
There will be no more “Drakeshaugh Dragon” This one day in the lives of the Potters is all I planned.

Name: chiaraad (Signed) · Date: 11/02/11 12:58 · For: The Dragon
i almost cried when harry and james were on the stone...harry is such a good dad!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. He certainly seems to be when we see him on Platform 9¾ at the end of DH. -N-

Name: nayin (Signed) · Date: 10/13/11 18:50 · For: The Drakestone
Harry and ginny r such fun parents,I love that u protray them as a loving couple even with 3 kids. As usual great work....

Author's Response: Thanks. Kids don't decrease love, at least not in my experience. The third and final chapter should be ready soon. -N-

Name: Amelia_Bones (Signed) · Date: 10/02/11 20:09 · For: The Visitors
Oh Neil, may I call you Neil? This is a wonderful story! I love seeing Harry and Ginny as parents. Loved his quick thinking as the kids questioned his story telling. Dolores...LOL

Author's Response: You may, Madam Bones ;-D
I've read very few stories where the "next-gen" are very young. This story is a lot fluffier than my other kids story "Strangers". Children are the harshest critics.

Name: edyeb (Signed) · Date: 10/02/11 18:50 · For: The Visitors
The Drakeshough Triwizard 7 Potter story!!!!!

Loved that the prat Z. Smith was the bad guy, he gives us Hufflepuffs a bad name. hahaha.

Great as always, but was surprised that there wasn't a reference or mention of Hagrid when the giant was slain.

Can't wait for what's next.


Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
As Harry discovered, simply making stuff up as you go along doesn't always work. The names are the ones (I think) would pop into Harry's head.
Hagrid has not appeared in any of my stories! How on earth have I allowed that to happen? That's somthing I must correct.

Name: grangergirl35 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/11 10:29 · For: The Drakestone
So cute :) I love how you portray Ginny and Harry as parents, and the use of the names to show that the teenagers still live inside them. :D

Author's Response: Thanks. More from the Potter parents soon in another chapter of "Strangers". I had fun with the names. -N-

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 10/01/11 7:33 · For: The Drakestone
Awwwww I like seeing Harry in daddy mode! Awesome!!

Author's Response: Thanks, daddy Harry is fun to write. One more chapter will wrap this up. -N-

Name: Amelia_Bones (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 18:43 · For: The Visitors
I found this just as I was jonesin' for more S at D! So cute. I can totally see how Harry would be a good dad being that he had such a crappy childhood. Kids are so honest. I'm curious to see how they react to an overnight with the Potters. They aren't the most conventional family ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks. This will be a three chapter short, Unconventional? Yes. This story is called The Drakeshaugh Dragon for a reason. ;-) -N-

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 08/21/11 17:25 · For: The Visitors
Excellent!! I love the other story so all extras dealing with the sane characters is awesome!!

Author's Response: Thank you. This story is set almost a year after Strangers at Drakeshaugh. N-

Name: iwishicouldwrite (Signed) · Date: 08/20/11 6:01 · For: The Visitors
Absolutely adorable!!! Harry is so good with the kids

Author's Response: Thank you. He certainly appearss to be very good with them in the epilogue. -N-

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