I am beginning to get hooked on the story. It was a little difficult keeping track of the characters. Now that I can keep Tristan distinct from Xander, I can pick up some threads of a mystery.
Aw! Good chapter! I love the teasing/brotherly love relationship between Albus and James and Lily is really sweet - stubborn like her mum! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
I love your Scorpius! He's like his dad in so many ways - but he seems like he's going to be kinder. Glad we got to see more of James; I like Alphie too! Intrigued to read more about Tristan's past! Update soon :)
I'm a big fan of your stories! But the only thing I've really noticed is like, some repetitivness (i spelled that wrong or somethingXD) with some of your words. Otherwise I love it, and it may just be me being too nitpicky. XD
Well written, but I would have liked to see Albus and maybe Rose sorted into a different House other than just Gryffindor. Ah well, that's your decision. It was truly a good chapter. I wouldn't be reading it if it wasn't good. On to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I considered it - though, from the little we were shown of Albus in the Epilogue, he didn't seem like a Slytherin, so, for me, he was always going to be a Gryffindor. I perhaps could have made Rose a Ravenclaw (or at times - considering her disposition - a Slytherin) but for plotting purposes, it's more useful to have them all in the same House. Hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I hope you keep enjoying it
I really enjoyed this chapter. Are they going to have more lessons with the Slytherins soon? I'm intrigued to see more of Scorpius Malfoy! Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: The most recent chapter was a Slytherin-orientated chapter and you'll see much more of Scorpius and friends later on in the fic! Thanks for the review :)
I love this story! I only just discovered it but it's beautifully done. Both Tristan and Effie are written very well. They have the perfect combination of kindness and mysteriousness that can be so hard to describe, but you pulled it off very well. The mysterious sides to each of them are definitely there and leave me desperate for more information, but you've balanced it well enough that I can't decide whether I trust them or not! I love your Albus, Rose, James, and Persephone, hate your Scorpius (in a good way! Haha), and am excited to learn more about everyone and everything! Well done and keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for you kind review! You'll find out more about both Tristan and Effie's backgrounds in later chapters and hopefully I'll maintain the mystery for a bit. Haha, Scorpius, in this story, is a character I love to hate. You'll see, as the story progresses, that he's always on the verge of nearly being nice but then remembers himself in time to be nasty. Thanks for the review! I hope you keep enjoying reading :)
i like the direction of this story so far. i hope you update soon! =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I hope you carry on enjoying it
I like the story so far! Will there be more James Potter in it later? Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yes, James will feature quite heavily in parts of this story later on - and his friends as well! I'm glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Excellent start. There are many of these beginning with Albus, and you make yours stand out.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's quite hard to make it different from all the other Albus Potter ones whilst staying loyal the world JKR created so I'm glad you think I'm doing ok!