Fabulous start! The line: "Knowing that you don’t remember how much I love you is killing me." Actually brougt a tear to my eye! Keep Writing! (I'd love to hear what you think of my fic: The Devils Triangle! (shameless plug))

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wrote this chapter so long ago and I completely forgot about that line, but I'm really glad you liked it. As soon as I finish writing this, I'm going to go check out your fic, which I assume is on this site. Thank you so much for reviewing!!

I am incredibly impressed with this story! I am absolutely loving it so far. Not only have you got a really interesting, thick plot going, but your writing style is thoroughly enjoyable! Thank you for being so careful about your grammar and sentence structure, it is a pleasant relief to find a Fanfic that you do not have to concentrate to understand. You had a strong start and got me hooked straight away. The standard was kept up through the whole peice, too. Great job! I am eagerly anticipating your next update! :D