Reviewer: mrsmalfoy12
Date: 09/16/11 22:19
Chapter: Chapter 3

Wow this is so good! I try to stay away from uncompleted works because im a tad impatient but yours was just too tempting haha. Have you already completed the story or are you writing as you go? Hope to read more soon because I can already tell this will be a story I check everyday for updates!

Author's Response: It takes time posting here, because of the volume of stories. I'm way ahead, actually. So no worries. I'm posting as they're getting validated. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying it - the next chapter is in the queue now, so hopefully soon. :)

Reviewer: ajr2382
Date: 09/07/11 20:48
Chapter: Chapter 3

Lovely! Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 08/25/11 6:54
Chapter: Chapter 3

Your portrayal of the conflict within Draco is spot-on, and I can't wait to read about his meeting with Bellatrix. More please! : )

Author's Response: Thank you! Now that we can submit again, I've got to get the next chapter in the queue! :)

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 08/20/11 8:42
Chapter: Chapter 2

Ok this was so sad. I can't believe Harry is dead. I really liked it though...its a lot like Nazi Germany. I hope you update soon:)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. The next chapter is in the queue. Hopefully, soon!

Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 08/20/11 7:28
Chapter: Chapter 2

I'm intrigued! You've got an interesting start here and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Hermione's guilt at what the Weasley's have given up for her, and the way she wants to leave them in order to spare them even more horror was definitely in character. I'm also looking forward to seeing how you build the relationship between Draco and Hermione. This is also wonderfully written. You kept me glued to the screen for both chapters!

Just one tiny nit-pick. There is a typo in your summary. It says Voldermort and not Voldemort. I also think I noticed the same typo somewhere in the first chapter. It doesn't hinder the reading experience at all but I thought I'd point it out anyway :)

Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great writing.

Julia xD

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the summary, girl! Gosh - how embarrassing. I'm clearly not good with my own editing, and was hoping to hide that. Bummer. ;) I'm working with a beta, but I didn't send her the summary, and you wouldn't believe how many times I used 'Voldermort'! I was cringing when she sent me back the first edits of my chapters, lol. I appreciate the keen eye and will be going over the chapter to fix those little things. And thanks for reading! I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think. :) LCailan

Reviewer: DracoGurl
Date: 08/19/11 16:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

You're a wonderful writer! I cannot wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm working on getting the next part validated. I'm glad you're reading.

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 08/18/11 7:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this chapter!! Keep up the good work! ;)

Reviewer: TeddyLupin64
Date: 08/11/11 10:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. That was powerful. Good writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 08/06/11 12:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really good start!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 08/06/11 8:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

You've done an excellent job with your first chapter! I was sucked in from the first paragraph, and I'll definitely be reading every single chapter to come. Just brilliant!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I appreciate the kind words.

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