Too short. I need more.
Bit short. The next chapter looks interesting.
Nicely done. The tension, the repetitive confrontations, the glimmer of remembrance...then nothing. Thank you for bringing Ginny into the mix and for using her observations to reveal a vital piece of information. The eye contact is priceless. I'm glad you are posting frequently.
This is a different sort of story and quite sad. How long will it go on for?
Author's Response: This story has 21 chapters :)
Yhis is a very interesting story with an unusual plot.
This storyline is very intriguing. I don't know where you are going with it, but I hope the character development and events are well-rounded and believable. I look forward to future installments.
When are you going to post the next chapter?
although i love tom felton, I hate Malfoy, the books showed him to be a horrid little brat, whereas the films turned him into Draco and everyone loved him. I like to see fanfics that stay true to how JK showed malfoy to be :)
Author's Response: It's been a long time, but I'm finally getting the rest of the story up! I hope you come back to read the rest!
Please finish this one quickly, but don't rush it of course. Make it good.
Author's Response: It's been a long time but I'm getting the rest of the story up shortly. I hope you come back to read it!
Really looking forward to the next chapter.
You have set this mystery up really well and I am looking forward to seeing where you will take us...
Author's Response: I hope you come back to read the rest as I get it up this week!
Interesting plot idea...such a sad concept : ( Hermione's world without her love for Ron. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I hope you come back to read the rest even though it's been a long time!!
OK. I read the summary, then read the chapter, and then read the summary again and finally understood the idea... but its a brilliant idea of course.. I'm really really looking forward read the next chapter
Whoa! This was really good. Draco honestly gave me chills. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: I hope you come back and read the rest!