Reviews For Never Been Kissed
Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 02/14/12 1:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very cute!

Reviewer: Maggie_Weasley-Tonks
Date: 10/01/11 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

OMGG I loved this! It was like, perfect. I can TOTALLY relate to her boy issues. But yeah that's not the point... Anyway, this was great! Write another one like it!

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/29/11 23:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

I enjoyed that! I enjoyed that very much! I am just visualising the stunned and disappointed look on James' face, priceless! What's the bet that he won't play too well during Quiddich practice? He will literally have his head in the clouds (please excuse the lame pun)!

Reviewer: TheSilverEagle
Date: 07/30/11 17:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was funny! I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 07/30/11 9:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw, this was cute. :) I love the dialogue between Snape and Lily - their friendship and one-sided romance was captured perfectly. James was written wonderfully too. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it was in character and believable, that's usually what I'm most worried about. :)

Reviewer: ravenclaw1997
Date: 07/30/11 6:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a great story! Nice and short, just what I was looking for. I knew what was going to happen from the moment I figured out how old they were, and it was wonderful! I liked seeing a different side of Severus from the one I usually read in fanfiction, and I might have to go read a Sev/Lily story now. Thanks for bringing that out! (:

~ Manda



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it enough to read other stories like it! :)

Reviewer: sas__x
Date: 07/30/11 4:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is lovely! So cute. I think you got Lilly's character spot on.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it was in character, I was worried about that since I haven't really written Marauder's Era in a while. :)

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