Reviews For Mum
Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 07/29/11 16:58
Chapter: One-shot

A wonderful story. Well written.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: thenewandawesome
Date: 07/29/11 14:18
Chapter: One-shot

I'm crying!

Author's Response: I hope that's a good thing. >.> Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 07/29/11 12:48
Chapter: One-shot

This was definitely bittersweet. I always like to think that those who die never truly leave. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I like to think so, too.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/29/11 10:27
Chapter: One-shot

That was great! I'm crying now......

Author's Response: Thank you. I had tears in my eyes writing it.

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 07/29/11 7:44
Chapter: One-shot

So sad, but very sweet, very good idea, very well written - second person was a twist, unusual - but I loved it. =)

Author's Response: I've never written second person, so I've been interested as to what the reactions would be to this story. Thanks for commenting on that. And thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bellaminx
Date: 07/29/11 4:08
Chapter: One-shot

Well done on an excellent one-shot. Felt it was beautifully written and really evoked a real sense of Lily's sadness and regret.

Author's Response: Oh, wow, thanks! That's very kind of you. Thank you for reading and reviewing it!

Reviewer: RedhairedMom
Date: 07/28/11 23:22
Chapter: One-shot

I love this story! It brought tears to my eyes because I can only imagine the pain and frustration that Lily feels being able to see Harry but not being able to help or comfort him. You captured it all so well.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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