I'm really not a Harry-Hermione fan the way you described it. I did love your story though! It was so emotional!!!!!
ooo i like very much this could turn into a few chapters and give him a funeral if you could be botheres,i would read it
it was well written and it did sound as if ron had grown up (also if you do right more (please do) then can u write the families reaction)
also that was a good reaction from Dumbledore
Ohhh, you made me cry!! It was beautiful, though, and just so Ron, of course he would give his life for the rest of the world. What a wonderful story!
i loved your story!!! it was very touching, and it made me cry!!!! it was so sweet that ron would sacrifice himself so that harry and hermione would be safe and happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work and write another story soon! also, if you have the chance please read my story-the boy who lived. it is my first story here and i need some reveiws! bye
hi u r a gr8 author. that was really touching and u nearly made me cry. i love ron so please don't kill him again. but still ur thing was really good. write more.
That was horrible----and, therefore, it was fabulous! My throat feels like it's on fire and the tears won't stop running. Do you know how hard it is to read a bright screen when you can't stop crying? Anyone who can provoke that kind of reaction, is a gifted writer indeed. I was convinced through most of it that the letter was from Harry---which caused a lump in my throat, nothing more. Then something didn't fit and I scrolled quickly to peek and saw it was from Ron---burst into tears at that point. Excellent story idea! Excellent author!
Author's Response: You might just be my favorite person in the world right now! That is the sweetest review I have ever gotten, and I thank you for being my first review on this sight. I'm truly delighted that you liked this little story, and please stop crying, I feel bad! Thanks again! Lara