I really liked it, it's a great start and I look forward to reading more!
Please write more! I can't wait to see how the story developes and I'm excited about reading a fic that has Teddy. :)
At the risk of sounding like a pathetic orphan, "May I have some more please?"
Ok, that was fast! She spares no punches. Well, it has been almost 7 years so... Next chapter please.
Very good, but I would have liked the inclusion of Harry, just to add a bit more of the original series. But overall, 3 out of 4
A great beginning! While I admit I wouldn't have pegged Hermione for the head-in-lap type, I still think that you're doing a great job so far of picking things up where they left up. Your synopsis of what to come really hooked me, and I greatly look forward to reading the rest. Cheers.
Definitely was not where I thought the story was going to begin considering the description says Harry and Ginny are married and Ron and Hermione are together for 5 yrs, but Im always in the mood for a H/R and H/G love story so bring it on : ) Cant wait for more!!!
I love it! :) Ron and hermione FTW!!!! wohoo...
I can't wait to see which direction you take with this story. I like your prose. Your style feels natural and easy to read. Good luck to your Quill.
Great job I really liked this chapter!!