Reviews For A Carefree Dance
Reviewer: thatsmygirlfriendyounumpties
Date: 02/09/12 4:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

i was smiling like a stupid with this fanfiction ,omfg it was awesome! :)

Reviewer: PrivetDrive_123
Date: 12/28/11 15:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ron's got some moves!

Reviewer: Claraowl
Date: 08/28/11 12:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

Eeeeee! Loveed it! I really wish JKR had put this moment in the book!
=(:>)3 hoo

Reviewer: Phoebe Silver
Date: 07/23/11 8:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

:) haha... Hilarious! :D love it! You are definitely one of my favourite authors. :)

Reviewer: WeasleyMom
Date: 07/19/11 19:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi there. I just wanted to pop in here and compliment you on your characterization of both Ron and Hermione, particularly Ron. I like the idea that he was planning to ask her to dance all through the wedding and then was forced to just blurt it out because of Krum.

I love missing moments, and I think the way you imagined this one happening was definitely plausible and a lot of fun to read. Take care.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Dracoisbeast
Date: 07/19/11 11:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

I always wondered how their dance was :)

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 07/18/11 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice job. You captured Ron perfectly--wanting to impress Hermione with 'suaveness', but at the same time, jealous of Krum. But it turned out well in the end.

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm so glad you think so, thanks :)

Reviewer: maggie_95
Date: 07/18/11 2:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was adorable! Very believable Ron!
It left me smiling :)

Reviewer: HPsibunaSarax3
Date: 07/17/11 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was great! So sweet :) I love Ron and Hermione!

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 07/17/11 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was really good!! I loved it !

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 07/17/11 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

So sweet! It made me smile =)

Reviewer: Karaley Dargen
Date: 07/17/11 12:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like this – of course, it's only a brief snapshot, but it works wonderfully as that. It's such a nice moment for them – Ron finally does things right romantically, even if he's still Ron and needs some time to sort of warm up. I love that you kept him so well in character. After all, the Ron we have in the books isn't a charmer at this point, even if he has learnt some tricks from that book. The title of your story fits perfectly, too, because this is the one moment of calm that they have together between the planning and the Horcrux-hunting. And yet it isn't exactly calm, but rather very lively – carefree. You've done a really great job with this story, and I hope you write more R/Hr. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review! Made my night :)

Reviewer: RonW
Date: 07/17/11 12:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwww.....
thats all i can think of right now :)
hey btw,, sorry to ask this through a review.. how can I contact to a beta for my fanfic? please tell me, it will be a great help .. thank you :)

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