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Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 08/02/11 19:30
Chapter: Leaving

I always love a good trio story but unfortunately this one isn't very original. It seems like you took pieces from the movie and book and just put them together in a story with very little flow. Good luck with the next chapter!

Author's Response: that's the point. the chapter was giving a little background in Ron's perspective before going into his in-depth tale of what happens to him.

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 07/17/11 18:08
Chapter: Leaving

that was really good!! l liked it a lot!! Keep writting!

Reviewer: Sternbetrachter
Date: 07/17/11 7:51
Chapter: Leaving

awesome beginning

Reviewer: RonW
Date: 07/17/11 7:17
Chapter: Leaving

truly amazing , isnt it? you have explained Ron's emotions perfectly.. We have read how Hermione felt in that time of Deathly Hallows, and Harry too of course, but no one ever bothered to write about how Ron felt all the way in this journey. I can feel how exactly I would have felt if I were him. It wasnt entirely his fault though.. There was locket (full of dark effects), there was Hermione (his girl) and there was Harry (his Rival), so it was natural for him to think this way. Oh man I have said too much, thats because I love him too much. update soon :)

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