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Name: potterhead2965 (Signed) · Date: 03/16/16 3:18 · For: SEVERUS SNAPE AND THE MEETING OF THE S.L.O.T.H.
Phineas is such a liar! I really like the way you've formed the story! Hats off...


Name: swati4891 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/11 1:36 · For: SEVERUS SNAPE AND THE MEETING OF THE S.L.O.T.H.
Ronus & Hermana! Ha ha, that was awesome!

Author's Response: That bit was my daughter's idea, so I'll pass your review on. :)


Name: AmityS (Signed) · Date: 07/31/11 14:05 · For: SEVERUS SNAPE AND THE MEETING OF THE S.L.O.T.H.
I really enjoyed this! I was smiling most of the time, and I loved how you made Scorpius a fan of Harry. You have greatly influenced the way I think of Scorpius, which is amazing because I generally don't allow fan fiction to do that. I also thought you had a very accurate portrayal of the Slytherins. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you, AmityS! Since Scorpius was kind of a blank slate it was fun to take liberties with the character. Wait til you see what I do with Dudley...


Name: majestic_ginny (Signed) · Date: 07/22/11 22:57 · For: SEVERUS SNAPE AND THE MEETING OF THE S.L.O.T.H.
Brilliant! :D Salazar and Phineas were hilarious, and I loved how Phineas was shutting Bathilda up and docking points. Honestly, I had assumed Bathilda would be a Gryffindor. Anyway, Snape and Lucius rocked, and I thought what you did to Scorpius was fantastic. That was awesome! :D Scorpius Malfoy, fan of all things Potter... wow. ^_^.

There were, however, quite a few typos. For instance, I saw "the Voldemort" somewhere, and you hadn't italicised some of their thoughts. And somewhere you had written Narcissus instead of -cissa. But other than that, the story was stunning. You had me laughing the whole way :)

--Nadia

Author's Response: Nadia thank you so much for your input! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I had fun writing it. And thank you for the heads up on the typos I will fix them tonight. And you know, I tried to italicize but I don't quite have the hang of the word processing this site uses yet. But spot on critiques thank you.


Name: The_Dream_Team (Signed) · Date: 07/20/11 23:41 · For: SEVERUS SNAPE AND THE MEETING OF THE S.L.O.T.H.
“A meeting of famous deceased Slytherins without Salazar Slytherin?! This is an egregious insult!" Bahaha I loved that! Really good and really funny :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I got another chapter coming with a Dudley/Harry reunion...


Name: izzylupin (Signed) · Date: 07/20/11 20:35 · For: SEVERUS SNAPE AND THE MEETING OF THE S.L.O.T.H.
Okay, i gotta say i loved this. The idea of Snape, McGonagall and Dumbledore all bickering as portraits made me really happy, but it wasn't cheesy or OOC. I also loved the idea of Scorpius having a Harry Potter obsession. Basically, fabulous.

Author's Response: Thank you izzylupin! I have a story cooking in my head with Snape going to Lucius' portrait to meet young Scorpius... :)


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