Reviews For Refuge
Reviewer: rozamarie
Date: 11/27/13 11:19
Chapter: A Dangerous Game

Will there be more love the plot

Reviewer: rozamarie
Date: 02/24/13 0:50
Chapter: A Dangerous Game

Very good plot line maybe im just used to long chapters so i feel alittle disapointed with the chapters bein short but it keeps me eger for more...i think i have mixed feelings bout the chapter length but can't wate for more again great plot :-)

Reviewer: Uae Potter
Date: 04/18/12 1:19
Chapter: A Dangerous Game

Are you going to write more?

Author's Response: I'm working on it! My life is a lot more busy than it used to be and its hard for me to find time to write. I'm so so sorry! Keep checking and I'll do my best to add a new chapter soon. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Lucy_Malfoy
Date: 12/27/11 5:05
Chapter: Empty Corridors

You're an excellent writer and this is a great story! Really well done =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: nalaisinmyheartforever
Date: 12/18/11 22:14
Chapter: A Dangerous Game

Are you going to write more I love this story!!!!:-)

Author's Response: Yes, hopefully this week! I'm glad you love it! (:

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 11/28/11 11:18
Chapter: A Dangerous Game

Don't be too worried about the wait. ^-^ It's a great story, so we'll be patient. Great update! I feel so sorry for Ginny. :(

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your patience! Things for Ginny will be looking up soon...maybe...I haven't really decided. But she will get her happy moments, I promise. (:

Reviewer: padfoot262
Date: 11/01/11 21:48
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

I love this story, and I feel that you accurately portrayed Ginny's character both with James and before she began dating him. Draco's character always seemed so sour in the books, but the reason that you gave (Draco being jealous of Harry's attention, calling the people he was with "Potter Worshipers) is one I had never thought of! Keep writing - I look forward to the rest of this story! :D

Author's Response: Thank you!! I appreciate the explanation of what you liked! I'm glad I could provide you with a new idea! I just submitted a new chapter, sorry it's been so long! Hopefully its up soon!

Reviewer: lunaforever
Date: 10/25/11 22:38
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

pleeeaassee right more! i check everyday to see!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! And I'm sorry for all the days you checked and saw nothing! I just submitted a new chapter so hopefully *fingers crossed* its up soon!

Reviewer: Shayshay2788
Date: 10/20/11 10:55
Chapter: Empty Corridors


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Uae Potter
Date: 10/01/11 10:06
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

I Love this story write more please

Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! I just submitted a new chapter, sorry it took so long!

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 09/25/11 19:06
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

I love it, love it, love it! Please tell me James comes back into play but that Ginny and Draco grow closer and in the end James is found out for what he really is? Wait! No! Don't tell me! No spoilers! I'll be waiting my my computer waiting for an update! :)

Author's Response: Hahahaha this kinda made my day. Which shows how sad my life is. Thanks so much! If you have any ideas I'd love to hear them and try to work them in! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Uae Jackson
Date: 09/24/11 13:18
Chapter: Empty Corridors

i love this story i keep going on it to see if you put more chapters I LOVE THIS STORY :-)

Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! I've been working on the next chapter and hope to submit it today or tomorrow. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Wolf7613
Date: 09/08/11 13:40
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

This is really good! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love the way you have portrayed Draco in this, when is the next chapter out because if it isn't soon I may have to hunt you down. This is one of the best stories I read so far!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond and update! I've been working on the next chapter and hope to submit it today or tomorrow. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: squeedle
Date: 09/04/11 23:01
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

I loved it! Are you going to write anymore?

Author's Response: I'm so glad you loved it! Yes, I do plan to write morem I submitted the next chapter yesterday so hopefully it will be up soon!

Reviewer: squeedle
Date: 09/04/11 22:37
Chapter: Empty Corridors

I know that Draco is irrevocably the antagonist in the series, but i cant help but love the way you've portrayed him here. It's not as if he's completely transformed into a good little boy, but the defiance his character shows toward the evil vileness of his father and the strange urge to help someone he loathes is very intriguing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always felt like there was more to him, so I try to bring that out in my stories. I'm glad you're intrigued!

Reviewer: Lis
Date: 09/03/11 21:00
Chapter: Empty Corridors

Great story so far, looking forward to the rest. You've done a great job discribing how Ginny felt while she was with James, very much how the victims in abusive relationships think.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: padfoot2116
Date: 08/29/11 17:14
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

Loved it! Keep writing :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I plan to!

Reviewer: iceprincesscutie
Date: 08/25/11 15:08
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

Super good chapter. Are you close to being done with the story???

Author's Response: Thanks! Um...I have no idea. It probably won't be longer than fifteen chapters, if that, but I'm not totally sure.

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 08/25/11 14:14
Chapter: Avoidances and Confrontations

Loooooove it! Can't wait for more! Although it was a little fast paced, the revenge from James made it less fast paced and more suspensful. Very nice work. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I agree, it was a little fast paced, but I needed to get James out of the way! But he may come back and make some surprise appearances....just maybe.

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 08/20/11 9:40
Chapter: Strong and Independent

It seems very unlikely that ginny would put with something like this. Other then that I liked it a lot. Keep updating:)

Author's Response: True, but Ginny also still really likes James...or who he used to be. And she's holding on to a dream that things will be okay again. Thanks, I will!

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