Hm...How much do you wanna bet their date's going to be interupted? That'd be an unfair bet seeing as you're the author. Will Avery's brother want revenge? Will Sirius get his girl? Will James and Lily finally sort this whole dating thing out? So many questions and so much room to grow! I love this story! Great chapter, can't wait for another update!
F I N A L L Y !!! They are finally together!! It took them ages!!!!
Yay, they're together! And they're going a date. I love how while they have a bit of awkwardness, they're also kind of comfortable with each other too. I'm also glad James's dad is okay, and I'm hoping he stays okay :S
And James made me laugh when meeting Lily's parents, but I'm glad Mr Evans finally warmed to him in the end.
I'm looking forward to this date! (Though I suspect something else will go wrong there...) Lovely chapter, Gina :)
Aw, Gina. How many ways are there to keep saying how terrific this is? I love it so much. Nice of you to have James say, "I'm not sure we should stop living our lives just because someone might come after us." Poor James... this will be their life eventually.
Keep on writing, girl! I can hardly wait for Tuesday night!
What a story!! I love your development of Lily's friendships with the marauders, it feels like a well rounded story, not just a romance!!!
Oh, how you write these little cliffhangers! As usual, I enjoyed this chapter so much, Gina. It's fun to imagine Lily using this time to bond a little more with Remus and Sirius--both of whom you have characterized so well. And what a great little surprise there at the end. Literally not sure I can wait for the next chapter this time. She seems to have come a long way emotionally where he is concerned during the absence. Bring more! :)
Waiting for her with flowers?? Now we are talking! :D
Thanks for finding a fix for the glitch (it only it would work for Pottermore Potions haha)
I am really enjoying this story and am looking forward to more.
I really like the backstory with James' parents and how his character growth is coming not only with age, but with the tragic events occuring to his family.
Aw, your last sentence was adorable! Thanks so much for changing the rating just for now, it was pretty frustrating not being able to read it.
I'm really liking Lily when she's not fighting with James, and I'm liking the way you're playing out her relationship with the other Marauders as well, particularly Sirius.
I could finally open the chapter!
Merlin, this is so beautiful but thrilled!
I absolutely love the fact that James and Lily wrote letters to each other, and James brining flowers to Lily, of course.
I am a little bit worried that Pietro Avery is out of Azkaban. Do I sense an attack to Lily, James, and probably Sirius?
This chapter was brilliant!
Loved the ending of chapter 21, but would love to open chapter 22 and enjoy it as well.
May have to go and read Neil's latest update again
I've been hanging off your every word, and am frustrated I can't open any chapters at the moment!
I can't read it either :(
Hi I'm having the same problem with accessing the story!
I can't open any of the chapters!
Why can't I open the chapter? I didn't have this problem before /: I can not open ANY of the chapters! Please some help
It won't let me read chapter 22. Just keeps going to the warnings then back to index page :(
It's not letting me read your newest chapter (twenty-two) so I'm slightly going crazy....
james is so nice with lily...i like this relation, you can feel they are in love, they care about each other, but they haven't kissed yet (after the events in the prefects lounge). i like when things go on slow cause one can enjoy in a better way the fantastic moments that characterize the beginning of a love.
lily is also getting closer to sirius and remus, and i like this thing too.
keep up the good work! :)
Absolutely amazing! I loved it! You did a great job explaining some things and my heart did a little flip when I read that James brought Lily flowers. Once again you did an amazing job.
Lots of love,
Rene Luna Smith