Aww, this was so sweet! I absolutely LOVED Lily and James ^_^, and the last line was simply brilliant. Keep up the good work! --Nadia
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. That last line was the spark for the entire story, which I'm glad you enjoyed.
Very adorable. Lily and James are sweet, but not unrealistically so. It's a very real moment and your use of detail makes it even more so. As a debut fic, it is excellent and I can't wait to read more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks for the praise! I knew it could be considered a fluff piece, but glad it seemed plausible. Currently waiting for one of the stories I'm working on to be edited, so hopefully I won't disappoint with future works.