Reviews For Boy or Girl?
Reviewer: Evangeline_DeMore
Date: 07/05/11 13:11
Chapter: Boy or Girl?

that's sweet!

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 07/04/11 1:58
Chapter: Boy or Girl?

Aww, this was so sweet! I absolutely LOVED Lily and James ^_^, and the last line was simply brilliant. Keep up the good work! --Nadia

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. That last line was the spark for the entire story, which I'm glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 07/03/11 19:39
Chapter: Boy or Girl?

Very adorable. Lily and James are sweet, but not unrealistically so. It's a very real moment and your use of detail makes it even more so. As a debut fic, it is excellent and I can't wait to read more from you!

Author's Response: Thanks for the praise! I knew it could be considered a fluff piece, but glad it seemed plausible. Currently waiting for one of the stories I'm working on to be edited, so hopefully I won't disappoint with future works.

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