Love it a lot. Oh, and I read your profile page. 'Alone and childless'...ha-ha. Poor Draco...joking. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. My friend LukiLaeta thought that was a bit... mean.... but I think it's true! He is a bad person.... =) Even though I get why he was acting bad. I have no sympathy. And yes, I will... I actually have a story in the queue right now....... I hope it makes it! =)

Love it, nice idea, an the poetry flows well. If there was no description, it would have taken till the end to know who the narrator was, but that's a good way of writing. Ha-ha...keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you (you should know). That was the point, that you have to figure out the narrator. I added the last bit at the end because I didn't know if anyone would have figured it out. I didn't have a great summary, and so I made it a little more obvious. Glad you loved it, I appreciate it. =)