Reviewer: Taki-Maki
Date: 07/15/11 17:54
Chapter: Stealing the Sword of Gryffindor

Love it a lot. Oh, and I read your profile page. 'Alone and childless'...ha-ha. Poor Draco...joking. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. My friend LukiLaeta thought that was a bit... mean.... but I think it's true! He is a bad person.... =) Even though I get why he was acting bad. I have no sympathy. And yes, I will... I actually have a story in the queue right now....... I hope it makes it! =)

Reviewer: blueowl
Date: 06/18/11 17:36
Chapter: Stealing the Sword of Gryffindor

Wonderful poem you've written!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. =)

Reviewer: LukiLaeta
Date: 06/17/11 12:38
Chapter: Stealing the Sword of Gryffindor

Love it, nice idea, an the poetry flows well. If there was no description, it would have taken till the end to know who the narrator was, but that's a good way of writing. Ha-ha...keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you (you should know). That was the point, that you have to figure out the narrator. I added the last bit at the end because I didn't know if anyone would have figured it out. I didn't have a great summary, and so I made it a little more obvious. Glad you loved it, I appreciate it. =)

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