Reviewer: stormygirl
Date: 08/04/11 11:56
Chapter: Chapter 6

Great job! I could just imagine all of this happening in my head as I read. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the chapter, stormygirl! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope that you like the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: starkllr
Date: 08/04/11 11:53
Chapter: Chapter 6

Hilarious! You just keep coming out with great chapters - keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, starkllr! I'm so happy to see that you are still reading and enjoying the story. :) I hope that you like the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 08/04/11 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 6

Omg I loved it. It was awesome...I can't wait for the next sequels:)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for such a complimentary review! :) I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me your thoughts! I hope that you enjoy the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: thornytorynx
Date: 08/04/11 9:48
Chapter: Chapter 6

Have been checking daily for this update and I can say it was well worth the wait (and your efforts)!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time each day to check for the new chapter. I really appreciate your kind support! :) Hope you like the next chapter! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Stella98989
Date: 07/26/11 21:15
Chapter: Chapter 5

O.o...I MUST know what happens!!!! I can't wait till chapter 6 is up!!!!

Author's Response: Chapter 6 should be approved by the moderators and posted very soon. Thanks for sending me a review and I can't wait to hear if you enjoyed the next chapter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/24/11 20:22
Chapter: Chapter 5

Oh no!! Results of beating up the bikers?!

Author's Response: Nope. All will be explained in the next chapter. Thanks for the review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/23/11 10:30
Chapter: Chapter 5

I hate cliffhangers! Good way to keep the suspense going, though! 

Author's Response: Sorry about the abrupt ending, but it was the perfect place to stop. Thanks for the review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/21/11 12:39
Chapter: Chapter 5

Ruby,
AHHH cliffhanger's are not nice. That was a great chapter. You always are able to give such great detail in your chapters. Keep them coming. To bad you didn't send them also to LA or even Las Vegas. That would have been funny seeing the golden trio in Vegas with Snape trying to control them. Oh well, can't wait to see how they get out of this current mess.
Kristin

Author's Response: Thank you for your continued support! :) I hope that you enjoy the next chapter - it will explain everything about their arrest. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 07/21/11 6:44
Chapter: Chapter 5

Another great chapter. I love how you are developing the characters & their relationships with each other.

Poor Severus. The more the kids get used to being around him, the more unsure of himself he gets. And as to children, twins run in Celie's family, don't they?

What a great cliffhanger. I hope the next chapter comes as fast as this one did. Can hardly wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you for another complimentary review! :) I am so happy to hear how you are enjoying the characters' interactions with each other - I take a lot of time trying to figure out how Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Snape would act toward one another. Your analysis of Snape is exactly right; he isn't at all comfortable with being seen as anyone other than the distant professor figure from the kids' past. And your comment about twins running in Celie's family is VERY perceptive, but you won't know for sure until we finish this story and the next sequel (which is very short). The next chapter should be posted shortly and I can't wait to hear your thoughts about it! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: thornytorynx
Date: 07/20/11 7:05
Chapter: Chapter 4

I just love this story. Getting the characters away from Hogwarts and the plot of the official books is so much fun. What a great idea to take them to the Southwest! Looking forward to the next installment!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I truly appreciate all of your kind compliments! I am so glad to hear that you think all my hard work is paying off! About halfway through writing The Accidental Godmother, the idea of having our favorite fivesome go on a road trip for the first sequel came to me. I thought that it would help all the characters see each other in a different light and would help pave the way for the later sequels. (Besides that, I knew that it would provide a lot of opportunities for humor!) I really hope that you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks again for being such a loyal reader and reviewer! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/18/11 19:42
Chapter: Chapter 4

You keep topping yourself with each new chapter!!!! Fantastic!!!

Author's Response: What sweet compliments! :) Thank you! If you think that this was a good chapter, wait until you read the next one (particularly the very end)! :) I can't wait to hear your thoughts about it. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 07/18/11 17:42
Chapter: Chapter 4

Wonderful. You packed so much into this chapter--humor, Snape's worry about being disrespected, Harry's discretion about his wand use on the snake, Celie's worries about Snape...

I eagerly await further adventures with this group.

Author's Response: Hello again! :) I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the chapter. When I was planning this story out, I didn't plan on writing such long chapters, but once I get started writing I find it hard to stop! Thank you for sending me another kind review and I hope that you enjoy the next chapter. :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/18/11 17:34
Chapter: Chapter 4

Ruby,
That was another great chapter. The Grand Canyon is an amazing place that I have seen in person. You convaided the whole experanice very well. My worst fear is 'RATTLESNAKES'. So promise me no more rattlers in the rest of this story. Any other snake is exceptable.
Much love and keep on writing this great story.
Kristin

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you were pleased with the latest chapter! :) Yes, the Grand Canyon is a stunningly beautiful place to visit - I'm glad to hear that you have been there and that I was able to capture its essence within the chapter. I promise you that there will be no more snakes of any kind in this story! I, too, have a tremendous fear of snakes, so I won't be mentioning them any more. Thanks for always sending me an encouraging review! :) I appreciate you taking the time to tell me your thoughts! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/14/11 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 3

Ugggg!! This is the first time I've had to wait for a chapter (all the rest had been previously written) and it will drive me CRAZY!! Anyway, awesome chapter! :D

Author's Response: The next chapter should be posted soon. I hope that you find it worth the wait! :) Thanks for letting me know that you enjoyed the chapter! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/14/11 5:24
Chapter: Chapter 2

I really like this story! Thumbs up! 

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope that you like the next chapter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/13/11 19:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

I look forward to a Harry Potter story that is filled with laughs and happiness opposed to the usual darker demeanor or the story

Author's Response: Hello again! I'm glad to see that you decided to check out this story, too! :) After writing about the drama in The Accidental Godmother, I was really looking forward to writing a lighter story with a good bit of humor in it. I'm really having a fantastic time writing it and I hope that you enjoy it! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/13/11 6:59
Chapter: Chapter 3

That was great!!! Fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you for the sweet review! I can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 07/12/11 16:04
Chapter: Chapter 3

Nice chapter. I liked the part about Harry, Ron, and Snape taking on the bikers. At first, I wondered why Hermione couldn't just use magic to get rid of them, but then I remembered the 'no magic' rule. I also liked Snape's thoughts on the shootout act. I can just see him standing there, criticizing everyone else's idiocy.

Author's Response: Hello again! I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the chapter! :) I, too, particularly liked the scene where Snape, Harry, and Ron got into a brawl with the bikers. I had a really fun time writing that part of the chapter. There's more to come and I hope to hear from you again! Thanks for the review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/12/11 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 3

Ruby,
That was another great chapter. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.
Kristin

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! :) I look forward to hearing from you after each chapter has been posted. Hope that you enjoy the upcoming chapter! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: iloveyou4ever
Date: 07/11/11 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 3

i love your series! the way you write about Snape is different. people usually make him feel all soft and stuff, but you keep him in his stubborn ways. (even if he can be romantic and sweet at times) i hope theres more to come ! (:

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so excited to hear that you are enjoying the series! :) I am also glad to hear that you approve of the way that I am writing Snape's character; my aim has always been to present the HP characters to be as true to the books as possible (while putting my own creative spin on the existing canon). There are a couple of more chapters to go in this story before the next sequel. Thank you for the review and I hope to hear from you again! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

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