Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/01/13 2:32
Chapter: Epilogue

That was a wonderful story. Snape is such a fun character to write. Not that I'd know that. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/01/13 2:12
Chapter: Chapter 7

That hotel manager sure was rude. Even if he needed the room he didn't have to be that rude. A drunk Minerva is funny. Severus just doesn't have any luck going to bed with his wife. A less strong person would just give up.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/28/13 1:28
Chapter: Chapter 6

I don't know what to say except that this chapter was just wonderful. The scenes in the restaurant with the karaoke were especially entertaining. They all deserve a good night's sleep.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/28/13 0:08
Chapter: Chapter 5

The southwest is truly beautiful and amazing. What had to have happened for all of those rock formations to occur. I don't think I'd ride a mule to the bottom of the Grand Canyon though. Once on a cross country flight it was clear enough to get a great view of the canyon. I wonder what our intrepid group is being arrested for.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/27/13 22:16
Chapter: Chapter 4

I'm kind of surprised that they camped in the canyon if there were snakes around. I really dislike snakes. Rattlers are especially vile. There's a lot of them around here. I still think Hermione is wound a little too tight.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/27/13 20:50
Chapter: Chapter 3

The guys were lucky to have gotten away from the bikers with a few bruises. It's too bad that they all agreed to not use magic on this trip. That would've been helpful during the brawl and healing later.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/19/13 17:49
Chapter: Chapter 2

The Severus/flamingo interaction was hilarious. It's too late now but I think Hermione should give up her tour book. Maybe she could find some Muggle magazines to look through. How funny that Severus met an Elvis impersonator. I never would've thought of that.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/18/13 16:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

I think Leaving on a Jet Plane was originally performed by Peter, Paul, and Mary--a folk band from the 60s. I think I bought their album when I was a very young girl. Anyway, Severus can be very naughty. I'm glad he finally grew some feelings. Ron's comments are hysterical. He sounds like I do when getting on a plane and I'm a Muggle who's flown many a time. What's even funnier about Ron is that he's flown on a broom during a Quidditch match--that has to be scary.

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 05/21/13 6:12
Chapter: Epilogue

Howdy, Partner!
Thank you for writing this story. It's amazing. I've never been to the Grand Canyon, but I know it's definitely not "a hole in the ground"! You are a fabulous author and can't wait for your magical series to grow. Thanks again and I'll be reading more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a sweet review! :) I really appreciate the fact that you are still reading, reviewing, and enjoying my writing. I look forward to continuing our conversations with the following sequels. Be sure to put the Grand Canyon on your bucket list - it is an amazing sight, as even Snape eventually conceded. Many thanks! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 11/19/12 6:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

I can't believe that while I was away you wrote four sequels! xD

Amazing, as always! I've told you before that I love your work ant the intervening year didn't change that!

I'll read the sequels as soon as I can and I'll leave a review at the end of each! : p (to compensate)
I love your Snape, I honestly think it would be really hard for him to change as much as some fictions tell us, though I like to think he could. Alas, your version is much more on par with reality. I also love the way Celie handles him and the kids! That woman is something else.

Kudos, my friend! : D

Author's Response: Hello again! Thank you for all of your sweet compliments. :) I really appreciate that you think my depiction of Snape is "more on par with reality" - I am always very conscious of his prickly personality and am constantly striving to make his character as true to form as possible, since we don't have the luxury of knowing what he would actually do if he were in any situation, other than spying and teaching. Your approval of how I represent his character really means the world to me. Also, I'm glad that you are enjoying Celie and her key role as mediator-in-chief. I can't wait to hear from you again! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 20:20
Chapter: Epilogue

Goodness! How old is Celie when she has her children? That poor woman has to keep waiting? *chuckles* I still loved this story!!!!!!!!!!!! Off to read the next in the series!

Much love and happiness,

Author's Response: Celie is 43 years old when she finally has her children. Thank you for reading and sending me your thoughts! :) I'm glad that you enjoyed this story. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 19:54
Chapter: Chapter 7

Teehee!!!!!!!!! I just realized that Sev and Celie got married secretly, and then his daughter followed suit! So why did Snape explode? What a great dad he is. But that's totally off topic to this story!
Great job, again! I hope Sev and Celie can catch a break! :)

Author's Response: To answer your question about Snape's anger when his daughter secretly eloped, I think it is a pretty universal trait for parents to want their children to "do as I say, not as I do" in terms of their behavior. Thanks for continuing to read and review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 18:40
Chapter: Chapter 6

Here is a review: :) :) I loved it! It was awesome! What an adventure (although I probably would have snapped, too). Still wishing I was Celie... *sighs*

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you are still enjoying the story! :) They are definitely having a most unusual adventure! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 5

Okay, I love it. I give up all my trying to hide my excitement and tears!!!! Love Sev's character! I loved the bracelets (especially since I know the predictions come true!) and I especially loved Celie! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for being such an enthusiastic reader! :) I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Author's Response: Thank you for being such an enthusiastic reader! :) I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 17:52
Chapter: Chapter 4

Oh, camping, camping, camping out under the stars, we're camping, camping, camping out under the stars! We're bringing out food and gear along! Camping out under the stars...
(just a road trip song:D)
I love the idea of Sev camping!!!!!!! :) I have loved every minute of this story!

Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to read and review! :) I'm thrilled to hear that you are still enjoying the story. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 17:21
Chapter: Chapter 3

Aw!!!! I still can't imagine their muggle fight, but I loved the description of it! ;) going off to read more...

Author's Response: I have to admit that the bar brawl with the bikers is one of my favorites parts in this story. Thanks for sending me your thoughts! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 2

Oh, I can't stop laughing and I'm eager for more!
Disclaimer: I am not JKR either, nor am I a professional critic. I'm an ordinary person looking for a fun read. ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you found the chapter amusing! :) I had so much fun writing this story. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 16:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, jealousy spreads throughout me for such a great opening to the next story in this series... I still wish that I was Celie!!

Author's Response: I'm super happy that you found this first chapter intriguing enough to make you want to read more. All I can say is that these travelers are in for a wild vacation! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: cuna molfoy
Date: 05/13/12 3:04
Chapter: Chapter 5


Author's Response: Sorry! I hope that you are enjoying the story! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Amelia_Bones
Date: 08/29/11 19:09
Chapter: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this series. LOL many times! Very well done. I love that Snape has developed but he's still the same guy. Thanks for the fun read.

Author's Response: Hello again! I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed the first sequel! :) I had so much fun writing it and hearing positive comments from the readers is just the icing on the cake! I am also very relieved to hear that you think I am writing Snape's character truthfully - that has always been my number one concern to make him seem true to his personality in the books, albeit with slight modifications for the alternate universe that I created for him. Thanks for the review and I hope that you enjoy the next sequel! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

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