Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/28/13 0:08
Chapter: Chapter 5

The southwest is truly beautiful and amazing. What had to have happened for all of those rock formations to occur. I don't think I'd ride a mule to the bottom of the Grand Canyon though. Once on a cross country flight it was clear enough to get a great view of the canyon. I wonder what our intrepid group is being arrested for.

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/29/12 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 5

Okay, I love it. I give up all my trying to hide my excitement and tears!!!! Love Sev's character! I loved the bracelets (especially since I know the predictions come true!) and I especially loved Celie! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for being such an enthusiastic reader! :) I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Author's Response: Thank you for being such an enthusiastic reader! :) I look forward to hearing your thoughts on the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: cuna molfoy
Date: 05/13/12 3:04
Chapter: Chapter 5


Author's Response: Sorry! I hope that you are enjoying the story! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 08/04/11 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 5

I'm loving it, just like I loved the prequel!!!

Ah, evil cliffhanger you've left us on!!

Please update soon. Congratulations on your fantastic work!

Author's Response: I'm so excited to hear from you again, Bastet! :) I'm glad that you are liking this sequel as much as you liked the original story. The next chapter is coming very soon and I hope that you like it! Thank you for the sweet review and the wonderful support! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Stella98989
Date: 07/26/11 21:15
Chapter: Chapter 5

O.o...I MUST know what happens!!!! I can't wait till chapter 6 is up!!!!

Author's Response: Chapter 6 should be approved by the moderators and posted very soon. Thanks for sending me a review and I can't wait to hear if you enjoyed the next chapter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/24/11 20:22
Chapter: Chapter 5

Oh no!! Results of beating up the bikers?!

Author's Response: Nope. All will be explained in the next chapter. Thanks for the review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/23/11 10:30
Chapter: Chapter 5

I hate cliffhangers! Good way to keep the suspense going, though! 

Author's Response: Sorry about the abrupt ending, but it was the perfect place to stop. Thanks for the review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/21/11 12:39
Chapter: Chapter 5

AHHH cliffhanger's are not nice. That was a great chapter. You always are able to give such great detail in your chapters. Keep them coming. To bad you didn't send them also to LA or even Las Vegas. That would have been funny seeing the golden trio in Vegas with Snape trying to control them. Oh well, can't wait to see how they get out of this current mess.

Author's Response: Thank you for your continued support! :) I hope that you enjoy the next chapter - it will explain everything about their arrest. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 07/21/11 6:44
Chapter: Chapter 5

Another great chapter. I love how you are developing the characters & their relationships with each other.

Poor Severus. The more the kids get used to being around him, the more unsure of himself he gets. And as to children, twins run in Celie's family, don't they?

What a great cliffhanger. I hope the next chapter comes as fast as this one did. Can hardly wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you for another complimentary review! :) I am so happy to hear how you are enjoying the characters' interactions with each other - I take a lot of time trying to figure out how Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Snape would act toward one another. Your analysis of Snape is exactly right; he isn't at all comfortable with being seen as anyone other than the distant professor figure from the kids' past. And your comment about twins running in Celie's family is VERY perceptive, but you won't know for sure until we finish this story and the next sequel (which is very short). The next chapter should be posted shortly and I can't wait to hear your thoughts about it! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

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