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Reviewer: Literally994
Date: 07/20/11 7:49
Chapter: What That Morning Brought

It's really sweet, maybe add a chapter o how Vernon reacted?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I think I'm just going to leave this as a one-shot, but that's a good suggestion.

Reviewer: witch1561
Date: 06/18/11 23:43
Chapter: What That Morning Brought

Just a small point - wasn't it a Wednesday morning she found Harry, not Monday?

An interesting look at what's going on inside Petunia's mind.

Author's Response: Was it a Wednesday? You're probably right. I didn't think to check on that, because I didn't know it was mentioned.:P Thanks for the correction. I'll change it.

Reviewer: residentmuso
Date: 06/18/11 23:07
Chapter: What That Morning Brought

well, we can't leave the review box all sad and empty now, can we?

great story, i really loved the idea and you wrote it really well ;)

Author's Response: Thanks!:)

Reviewer: mzap
Date: 06/18/11 9:19
Chapter: What That Morning Brought

I really liked this! I thought it was great the way you described Petunia's morning routine and how simple the morning seemed until she saw Harry on her doorstep. The reminiscing was also well done and fit in nicely with the story. Great job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: blueowl
Date: 06/18/11 6:19
Chapter: What That Morning Brought

Wonderful one-shot! You've described Petunia in the same way that JKR did! I loved it and sort of wish it wasn't a one-shot...

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm not planning on turning it into a chaptered story, but you never know:)

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