Reviewer: hanname
Date: 02/06/13 6:18
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

Wonderful :)

Reviewer: slytherinforthewin
Date: 08/26/12 19:15
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

really cute..............and ron is shown just as he is..hesitant,unsure

Reviewer: Lisl Lurker
Date: 09/29/11 12:17
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

I loved it! Just the kind of fan fiction I love. Thank you!

Author's Response: No, thank YOU. :) Glad you enjoyed it! :D God bless! -Jenn

Reviewer: sarahbabe215
Date: 09/06/11 19:27
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

I loved it..

Author's Response: Merci! Thanks so much for taking the time to review! :) God bless! -Jenn <><

Reviewer: InvestedWithNargles
Date: 09/06/11 17:51
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

This is my FAVORITE Ron/Hermione story EVER! You did a great job! I'm excited to read more of your work!!:)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!!! It means a lot. :) So glad you enjoyed it! God bless you. :) -Jenn <><

Reviewer: jeanius
Date: 09/05/11 7:14
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

Quite speechless... I just love the kissing part! LOL! just kidding! The explanations was so cute but quite... I don't know... not so canon but they're awesome! Just love them being close together, literally and figuratively!

Author's Response: Haha I can't say I've never wanted to say that before. :P Thanks! I know it's not entirely accurate. I think it'd take them a couple of days, if not weeks to figure it out, but I just wanted to post something short and sweet. Don't worry, the long, canon (I hope) complicatedness is coming!!! I hope. Again. ;) Thanks for reviewing! God bless! -Jenn <><

Reviewer: Claraowl
Date: 08/28/11 12:25
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

I loved it! Also, I have tons of ideas, but I'm saving them for me! Now if I could just figure out how to submit them...

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I wish you the best in publishing your own stories. It really is worth it, and if it's not rated Professors, I'll look forward to seeing you work. ;) Get a beta if you want, or just go for it! God bless you! - Jenn <><

Reviewer: canufeelthemagictonight
Date: 08/26/11 15:08
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

This is my ALL-TIME FAVORITE STORY!!! I loved the way it cleared so many things up about the plot. I can't wait to see what else you write!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot. More's coming!!! ;) God bless you! -Jenn <><

Reviewer: AmeliaWeasly
Date: 08/22/11 19:35
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

I've read this story at least six times and I can't believe I haven't reviewed it yet. Anyway, this is a great story and you did a fantastic job. Well done!

Author's Response: SIX TIMES?!?!?! :D <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 You get six hearts then. :) Merci beaucoup! :D God bless you! :) -Jenn <><

Reviewer: HermioneWeasley63
Date: 08/20/11 19:41
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

I loved this story. I thought it was done extremely well, very Ron-Hermione. Well done! Definitely one of my favorites!

Author's Response: Very Ron/Hermione? Aww, shucks. :D That's exactly what I was going for, mind you. ;) Have a blessed day! :) -Jenn <><

Reviewer: LunaWeasley-Potter
Date: 07/27/11 15:34
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

this iz my favorite fan fiction. great job!

Author's Response: Awwwwww! Thanks! this iz my new favorite review. ;) Have a wonderful life. God bless you! :D -Jenn <3

Reviewer: thegirlwholived21
Date: 07/15/11 19:48
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

This was really good. I loved it

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! :) God bless you.

Reviewer: kwoord
Date: 07/15/11 12:44
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

That was adorable. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks! I loved your review. :P God bless you!

Reviewer: bk64
Date: 07/08/11 4:25
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

This is good! were you involved with MiM on facebook? they had Ron confess that he loved Hermione right after Harry defeated voldemort, he got all the way up to "you probably know where this is going, so Hermione, will you..." before Harry butted in!! this was very close to a conversation that could've happened after that and i loved it!! thanks!!

Author's Response: Congratulations; you are the eleventh reviewer!!! (No, you don't get anything. My favorite number is just eleven. Moving on.) I haven't heard of this "MiM" thing on Facebook. However, I consider it to be a great compliment that this almost goes along with what is the canon in your head, so to speak. This conversation was taken from one of the canons in my head (if that makes any sense) and my goal as a writer is to share that. So thanks for reading, reviewing, and loving it! God bless you! :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 07/01/11 5:50
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

Very sweet story! I loved it all, except when Hermione said, "Just ludicrous." I just couldn't imagine her using that word. This was a very cute scene and I could absolutely see them having this moment in the common room after the war. I enjoyed the reminiscing through the years and Hermione admitting she liked red heads haha. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Now that I think about it, I can't quite imagine that either. Hmph. Oh well. :) And i just had to put that bit about Ron's hair and freckles since I love them too. :P Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 06/30/11 14:01
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

Hey! You told me you were writing a fic a while back. It's probably not this one because you mentioned something about George being in it, right?

Anyway, I thought it took a lot of courage to write in first person Ron, because he's such a difficult character to get into and everything. Kudos to you for that. This story was really sweet and cute. I've stopped reading fluffy fics but this was an exception -- because you've reviewed Checkmate and beta'd that tiny part.

My only issues, really, were the Americanisms here. Things like "gotten" and other stuff just got in the way, really. "Alright" isn't exactly a word, so "all right" is better. And occasionally you were a little repetitive but that's not really a big deal. Overall I really enjoyed the story -- Romione is such a popular ship that often, there are really bad stories in fanfic and you have to sift between the good and bad. Obviously, your story is in the former category but that's what's a little off-putting for Romione for me.

Great story and keep it up!

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Nope, it's not part of that chaptered fic, no. I took a break from it because George was driving me up the wall and decided to post SOMETHING, you know? So I did this little one-shot in which I did not have to mess with George. Yay. :) Ron is rather difficult, especially because I like to use bigger words and such, whereas he does not possess the brains for that. I don't think I manage to quite control that, but I do my best. So thanks. Thanks for the criticism. I really need it from you British people since I'm American ("alright" is a word in America). And I know I'm repetitive; I think it's my least favorite thing about my writing. :/ I'm glad, however, that you enjoyed it despite its shortcomings and your lack of enthusiasm for fluff. And I promise I will respond to your email eventually. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Evangeline_DeMore
Date: 06/30/11 3:52
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

It was amazing! :) didn't find it to angsty though ( not that it a bad thing.

Author's Response: Thank ya very much. :P And that's true. There's not a ton of it (and that's how I like it), but Hermione did cry, so . . . Yeah. :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/29/11 6:20
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

I liked it! Probably the most honest conversation that I have read between the two of them :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! That's a huge compliment, really. :)

Reviewer: RonW
Date: 06/27/11 19:57
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

OK.. I do love it because its a R/Hr fic... characterization of Ron was perfect, Hermione was a bit un-Hermionish in her dialogues.. overall good story
but im really tired on reading about their confessions and clarifications on Krum and Lavander. I wish writers will bring something new, and something different.. you know, some action , mystery and then romance.. i would love that.. lives of R/Hr ought not to be that simple.. I like your author's note in the start by the way .. it was really funny :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you found Ron "perfect," and I agree and regret that my Hermione is lacking. I don't really have any excuse for it other than that we don't really get to know Hermione all that well in situations like these, and therefore, I struggled with how to make her act. :/ I don't blame you at all for being tired of it, I am as well; I just thought that since it'd been done before, it'd be a good place for me to start mentally as a writer. However, I am working on a chaptered R/Hr fic that will hopefully satisfy readers like you who want more of an original, substantial plot with some action and romance (and hopefully mystery!). I promise, it'll be a lot more complicated than this thing. To be perfectly honest, I was sick of writing and not posting anything from my chaptered fic (see my profile for details) that I mashed bits and pieces of several ideas I was having into a one-shot, just so I could feel like I was getting somewhere. :P This piece was not intended to be super complicated. I, too, doubt that seven years of sexual tension could be resolved so simply and boldly (especially on Hermione's part--the problem with her, if I'm right). The chaptered fic will have PLENTY of confusion, so don't you worry. ;) I'm glad you liked my A/N. I liked writing it. Have a blessed day!

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 06/27/11 18:57
Chapter: Of Freckles, Fireworks, and Funny Things Muggles Say

This was such a great story!! I really loved it:)

Author's Response: And I love you for saying that! ;)

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