Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 06/23/11 23:58
Chapter: The Haunted Tower

Great chapter,
Lavender is so useful with her witch brain and her werewolf nose.
Love the interplay between Lavender and Susan.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love writing the interplay between Lavender and Susan. so there will be more MIT stories. -N-

Reviewer: Betamax
Date: 06/21/11 18:44
Chapter: The Haunted Tower

Its been a couple weeks since I checked your work but this story is definitely up to par. I don't yet know 'whodunnit' but I will be looking for clues. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope I’ve scatter enough information in the next chapter to allow you to make a decent guess before the end. -N-

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/21/11 13:00
Chapter: The Haunted Tower

What a wonderful chapter. Lavender is ? I guess theirs no other word I can find to describe her other than 'always turned on'. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Author's Response: Thank for the review. The next chapter will be the last due to the time constraints of the challenge. There’s lots more Lavender, but the Muggles solve the mystery. -N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 06/15/11 23:15
Chapter: Prologue: Break in Transmission

Great start!
Looking forward to following the clues.
What a horrid bunch of characters, just like the real thing probably!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Time is pressing, the next chapter is submitted. Which of the crew committed the crime? Is this simply a police matter? Why would the Auror Office get involved? -N-

Reviewer: mistyquest
Date: 06/13/11 20:53
Chapter: Prologue: Break in Transmission

Oooooh a riveting beginning!! Can't wait for more:)
The ending reminds me so much of Quirrell yelling, "TROLL! TROLL IN THE DUNGEONS! Thought you ought to know."

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, your first for my stuff :-D This prologue introduces the suspects. Do you have any idea whodunit? -N-

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/13/11 20:18
Chapter: Prologue: Break in Transmission

WOW. That was awsome. Can't wait to read the next chapter. The way you have started this story out and already it sounds like a amazing story in the works.

Author's Response: Thanks this story is looking like it will be about 15000 words, chapter 2 is in the queue (I have a deadline to meet). -N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 06/13/11 20:03
Chapter: Prologue: Break in Transmission

OHHHH, a wonderful intro with a wink and a nod to the professional ghost hunter shows making a reoccurance. I can remember back in the 1970' and 80's when we had Ripley's Believe It or Not and those Halloween type specials on shows like That's Incredible.
Can't wait for more MIT

Author's Response:
Thank you.
Any resemblance between the cast of “Haunted House: Live” and that of a real UK “ghost-hunting” show from the last decade is purely coincidental. ;-)
The next chapter is already in the queue.

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