Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:26
Chapter: Chapter 27: Loyalties and Secrets

Oh dear... Cannot wait to see what Goyle is actually up to!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:17
Chapter: Chapter 26: Aurors Come Calling

Oh how the mysteries continue to pile up! I am loving every minute I spend reading this fic :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:09
Chapter: Chapter 25: "Official" Anniversary

Awww, Very sweet anniversary!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 22:54
Chapter: Chapter 24: Engagement Party at the Burrow

Terrific chapter, I get the feeling that things are going to get crazier concerning the Dark Marks...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 22:46
Chapter: Chapter 23: Goyle Brings Trouble

I have to agree with Hermione, I think Goyle hasn't changed at all! Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 22:39
Chapter: Chapter 22: Vrasta Vultures vs. Quiberon Quafflepunchers

I love reading these long chapters and it was so nice to see Viktor and Draco getting along so nicely.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 22:27
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Ghost in the Louvre

Thanks for each chapter update! I love following this story :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 22:16
Chapter: Chapter 20: Spring Semester Begins

Hmmm, Interesting map...So sorry I fell behind in my reviewing. I guess I wasn't getting email updates :-(

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/28/12 12:03
Chapter: Chapter 35: Plan of Attack

Yeah for another chapter! It was uplifting to see Harry, Ron, "Greg", Draco and Hermione working together...I hope this plan works out. I like how Draco interjected about it being to dangerous for Hermione to be involved...I hope to see more of his protective side as this plan unfolds. How many more chapters do you have planned for this story? You said you had a third story planned, right? I look forward to much more of Draco and Hermione

Author's Response: This story will be either 38 or 39 chapters (the last chapter, 38, keeps getting longer and longer as I wrap up all the lose ends!). I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter on the way to the big confrontation. And yes, I already have story 3 in the works -- but fair warning, I usually don't start posting on a new story until it is about 50% written, so that probably won't happen until the fall. Thanks for the review! Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/21/12 16:54
Chapter: Chapter 34: Goyle's Tale

Always happy to see an update from this fic : ) Amazing shower scene...perfect way to get them back together! I was a little thrown off by how embarrassed Hermione was...they were having sex for almost a year, she should be used to it. When I said I was hoping the reunion would be more emotional and romantic I didn't necessarily mean sex, although that's always an added a bonus. I meant Draco saying how much he missed her and realized he couldn't live without her, etc, etc. Hope to see more of that as the fic goes on. Can't wait for more : )

Author's Response: I may be projecting a little bit -- I am always embarrassed myself when I write the sexy scenes -- so maybe I made Hermione more embarrassed than she needed to be. I also struggle to keep Draco in character, but make him express his devotion to Hermione. I'll try to be a bit more expressive with him going forward (although the story is pretty much entirely written at this point). Thank you again for your thoughtful review! Jenny

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 04/21/12 2:26
Chapter: Chapter 34: Goyle's Tale

Finally caught up! Very interesting storyline with the hag. So, so glad that Hermoine and Draco are back together! I'm eager to see how the Goyle situation turns out.

Author's Response: Nice to see you are continuing to follow the story. I think the interaction with the Hag was one of the first things I thought of for this story. Glad you found it interesting. Thank you, Jenny

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 04/21/12 2:26
Chapter: Chapter 34: Goyle's Tale

Finally caught up! Very interesting storyline with the hag. So, so glad that Hermoine and Draco are back together! I'm eager to see how the Goyle situation turns out.

Reviewer: Poojah
Date: 04/17/12 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 27: Loyalties and Secrets

Wow! Best chapter yet. It was so emotional. I was dreading readimg this chapter because I knew there was going to have a big confrontation. You brought some interesting points. Hermione needs to always be in control and she doesn't completely trust him. She will always be looking for a reason to doubt him. Even thought I believe he is wrong to help a loser like Goyke. I loved when he told her to back off. A man needs to be the dominate one in a relationship. Something Ron Weasley could never be.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. As a very dominant woman, however, I'm not sure I entirely agree with all your comments! Ha ha. I do think Hermione needs someone smart and strong. I liked Ron a lot in the books, but not so much in the movies. Strange, eh? Anyhow, thanks for the positive feedback! --Jenny

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 04/10/12 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 33: Draco to the Rescue

Thank you for not making me endure Draco&Aceline and Hermione&Tabor for too long :) This story is so addictive, and you do SUCH a good job of thoroughly acknowledging the various difficulties that would come from Hermione and Draco's relationship!

Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't want to torture anybody too long. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I appreciate the positive feedback! --Jenny

Reviewer: Looneylovegood19
Date: 04/05/12 3:37
Chapter: Chapter 33: Draco to the Rescue

This is so cute! Yay Draco and Hermione! ;D The best part of this chapter had to be that Carol's and Luke's disease hasn't been heard of in France for over 20 years. Genius!
On a different note you're on all roll! Congrats on such quick updates! Please keep it up! I really want to know more about what's up with Goyle.......can't wait!

Author's Response: You'll be happy to hear that Goyle's situation will be front and center for the rest of the story. My beta is the one who has been on a roll. She's great. The next chapter took me a bit longer to write -- I get embarrassed writing the intimate scenes. ;-) Thank you for your nice review, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/05/12 1:33
Chapter: Chapter 32: Hermione and the Hag

I completely missed this chapter! I thought only one new one was posted so I read the 33 and not 32 LOL. Interesting chapter...I enjoy reading about Hermione's travels, even if they aren't all danger free! Can't wait for more : )

Author's Response: You must have thought I was going crazy! Locking up Hermione without any explanation whatsoever. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, despite reading it out of order. There was a mix-up on our end too, so that's why they came back to back. Thanks for the review, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/05/12 1:19
Chapter: Chapter 33: Draco to the Rescue

Wow a new chapter two days in a row...this is a good week! I'm glad that my wish came true (from my previous review)...Draco came to Hermione's rescue and it brought them back together *tear*. It wasn't as emotionally intense or romantic as I envisioned but I am still excited to see our love birds back together : ) Can't wait for more! Especially wondering the truth about Goyle...

Author's Response: If emotionally intense and romantic mean what I think they might mean, then you will probably enjoy the next chapter. ;-) Thanks for the review, Jenny

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 04/04/12 19:39
Chapter: Chapter 32: Hermione and the Hag

Hmmmm. Interesting take on fairy tale-meets-reality. Tabor's mother a hag? And he didn't know himself? Sorry...doesn't jive. Didn't much care for the lengthy descriptions, but the shortened paragraphs and quick dialogue easily compensate. Using Hermione's mum as her go-to is practical and provides believable. I can see how contacting Mrs. Malfoy would circumvent the problem of cell reception at WUP. Good thinking.
When Hermione saw Tabor standing alone, my thoughts were instantly on his culpability at causing Carol and Luke's absence. If anything, I wouldn't be surprised if Aceline has Tabor under her spell and manipulating his behaviors to win Hermione's interest and keep her occupied, away from Draco.
Good job!!! Keep those chapters coming.

Author's Response: I guess it's not yet clear, but Tabor knows his mother is a Hag. Let me know what your take is on the Tabor/mother situation after you read the next chapter okay? (It's in the queue.) I'd like to get your take on things after you see where I went with this. Thank you for your review! Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/04/12 2:03
Chapter: Chapter 31: Navigating Being Alone

I truly do believe that Draco wants Hermione back. He is always making sure she is watching so he can make her jealous. I hope that something epic brings them back to together, like one of them is in danger and the other has to set aside their anger and use their love to save them. Draco may act like he doesn't care but if Hermione was in trouble, he would come to her aid...I am sure of it : ) Can't wait for more...I always look forward to updates of this fic!

Author's Response: Have you read the next few chapters over at Lumos? If not, it's like you're reading my mind! :-) Jenny

Reviewer: KmGa129
Date: 04/03/12 23:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

Sooo looking forward to the next chapter!!! I loved the previous story and have been hanging on to your every written word!! Anxiously waiting to see how the rest of the tale goes! Fantastic work!!! =D

Author's Response: Wow! What an encouraging review. Thank you very much for your kind words. --Jenny

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