Reviewer: Looneylovegood19
Date: 05/25/12 12:49
Chapter: Chapter 38: Final Exams and Spring Dance

I love this story so much i never want it to end!

Author's Response: It's on the verge of ending, but I'm already working on another sequel. It will cover their sophomore year at WUP. Thank you for your nice review! Jenny

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 05/24/12 4:32
Chapter: Chapter 38: Final Exams and Spring Dance

Really? Sorry, but this chapter just does not stand up to your previous work. The early sections of description are bland. What happened to the quick dialogue and succinct passages? If you intended to save your writing skills for the sex scenes, why bother with the final exams and quid ditch match? I am disappointed.

Author's Response: I'm sorry to disappoint you. As a professor, I love to think about the classes Hermione is taking and the final exams. If that's too much detail for you, I'm sorry. There are times when witty dialogue doesn't seem to fit. I'm trying to wrap up their year at school and there are things that may seem boring to some that I think are important to round out their school year experience. Thanks for your review, Jenny

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/23/12 18:20
Chapter: Chapter 38: Final Exams and Spring Dance

Oh I loved reading about their finals! And the end of the chapter was pretty good too ;-)

Author's Response: I'm glad someone enjoyed reading about their finals. Others did not. But I'm a professor, so I love planning out their courses. I'm glad you liked the ending too. I struggle with the intimate scenes. Thank you for your nice review! Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 05/23/12 1:53
Chapter: Chapter 38: Final Exams and Spring Dance

This chapter started out boring with all of the studying and taking exams but it redeemed itself with the sweet ending : ) Definitely the romance I was hoping for! At this point in the story we need something to look forward to...Ginny and Harry's wedding, more drama, etc. Give us a glimpse of where this is going, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: You're going to have to wait for the sequel for the wedding, but I'm already starting to work on it. Their freshman year is coming to an end. But I'm leaving some mysteries to solve in their sophomore year, so hopefully you will follow me there. Thank you for your nice review! Jenny

Reviewer: googirl97
Date: 05/14/12 23:49
Chapter: Chapter 37: Stinging the Smugglers

I like this chapter. It is very complex and obviously well thought out. Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Thank you! I do put a lot of thought into these stories -- dropping hints along the way and building up to things. But I find that to be really fun. Thanks for the review, Jenny

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/14/12 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 37: Stinging the Smugglers

And there's the hitch! I have to say I didn't see the broom disappearing though! Cannot wait for the next chapter :-)

Author's Response: There's always a hitch, isn't here? Ha ha. I'll try to get the next chapter (second to last) up soon. Some issues are being carried over into story # 3, though, so not everything will be resolved. Hopefully you'll continue with me to their sophomore year at WUP. Thank you for your review, Jenny

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 05/13/12 3:22
Chapter: Chapter 37: Stinging the Smugglers

Very interesting chapter! How unfortunate that Mrs. Malfoy came home! Can't wait to find out who the nephew is!

Author's Response: Some things you are going to have to wait for story # 3 for, because freshman year is almost over. Thank you for your review, and for hanging in with my story until the end (or almost). Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 05/12/12 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 37: Stinging the Smugglers

Wow, definitely an action packed chapter! It was kind of funny when Narcissa walked right in on the set up...nothing ever goes as planned! Can't wait for more : )

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. I thought a simple romance would be too boring, so I planned this (and the Hag episode) from the very beginning. The next chapter should be up soon. Thank you, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan
Date: 05/08/12 10:11
Chapter: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising

nice chapter :)

tabor was truly naive .. and interspecies relations teaching fellow thinking that a MUGGLEborn and a hag would get along ... you think he would know the dangers of a hag ... :L

i really like the end of the chapter ... hermoine truly is not that great at coming up with acronyms haha

thanks for another great chapter .. keep up the good work

cant wait for the next :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. The next chapter is coming soon. I'm just now finishing off the very last chapter (39) of this story (takes a while to get them up on the site). Thanks again for the feedback, Jenny

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 05/02/12 0:57
Chapter: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising

Sorry to be so late in responding! The last two chapters are full of important information that 1) set up the storyline for more intrigue and possibility while 2) re-establishing Draco and Hermione's relationship. You have dangled a few carrots with Beline's absence and Tabor's refusal to believe Hermione is not interested in him. Great job!

Author's Response: You are a very engaged reader, which is great, but makes me wonder if some of my writing choices make things seem more important than they are meant to be. You'll see how all the loose ends get tied together in the next few chapters, and then you can let me know if I've lived up to your expectations. Thanks for the review! Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 05/01/12 2:46
Chapter: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising

Although this seemed to be just a filler chapter while we wait for the plan with Goyle to go into action, I still enjoyed it : ) I can tell you are starting to set up the plot for the next story with Draco and Hermione's summer plans. I think they should transfer to the wizarding school in London. They could spend more time with Harry, Ginny, Luna, Neville, etc. and maybe everyone could accept Draco more. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see Hermione as Narcissa and hoping to see the protective side of Draco : )

Author's Response: You are right -- I am setting up the next story. No transfer plans, though -- but that's an interesting idea! The next chapter is coming soon. I'm not sure how protective Draco is in it. I tend to like Hermione in the brave heroine role! Thanks for another thoughtful review! --Jenny

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:11
Chapter: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising

I hope this goes off without a hitch! Wonderful chapter :-)

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't promise no hiccups. Gotta keep it interesting! ;-) --Jenny

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:06
Chapter: Chapter 35: Plan of Attack

Yay! I cannot wait to see how this plan works out

Author's Response: My goodness -- you did a lot of reading in one day! Thank you for all your supportive comments after each chapter. I appreciate the positive feedback! :-) Jenny

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:00
Chapter: Chapter 34: Goyle's Tale

Very sweet chapter :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:55
Chapter: Chapter 33: Draco to the Rescue

Amazing chapter! I am really enjoying catching up on all the chapter updates I missed!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:51
Chapter: Chapter 32: Hermione and the Hag

Oh wow, Totally did not see that coming!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:47
Chapter: Chapter 31: Navigating Being Alone

Love Ginny! I think she is one of the characters that comes across completely honest

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:42
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Separate Ways

Jeez What a jerk Draco is!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:39
Chapter: Chapter 29: From Bad to Worse

This chapter made me kind of sad because of Draco and Hermione! Hope things start to get solved soon

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:30
Chapter: Chapter 28: Eavesdropping and Compromise

Great chapter!!!

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