Reviewer: googirl97
Date: 05/14/12 23:49
Chapter: Chapter 37: Stinging the Smugglers
I like this chapter. It is very complex and obviously well thought out. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do put a lot of thought into these stories -- dropping hints along the way and building up to things. But I find that to be really fun. Thanks for the review, Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/14/12 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 37: Stinging the Smugglers
And there's the hitch! I have to say I didn't see the broom disappearing though! Cannot wait for the next chapter :-)
Author's Response: There's always a hitch, isn't here? Ha ha. I'll try to get the next chapter (second to last) up soon. Some issues are being carried over into story # 3, though, so not everything will be resolved. Hopefully you'll continue with me to their sophomore year at WUP. Thank you for your review, Jenny
Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 05/13/12 3:22
Chapter: Chapter 37: Stinging the Smugglers
Very interesting chapter! How unfortunate that Mrs. Malfoy came home! Can't wait to find out who the nephew is!
Author's Response: Some things you are going to have to wait for story # 3 for, because freshman year is almost over. Thank you for your review, and for hanging in with my story until the end (or almost). Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 05/12/12 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 37: Stinging the Smugglers
Wow, definitely an action packed chapter! It was kind of funny when Narcissa walked right in on the set up...nothing ever goes as planned! Can't wait for more : )
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. I thought a simple romance would be too boring, so I planned this (and the Hag episode) from the very beginning. The next chapter should be up soon. Thank you, Jenny
Reviewer: leaj0rdan
Date: 05/08/12 10:11
Chapter: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising
nice chapter :)
tabor was truly naive .. and interspecies relations teaching fellow thinking that a MUGGLEborn and a hag would get along ... you think he would know the dangers of a hag ... :L
i really like the end of the chapter ... hermoine truly is not that great at coming up with acronyms haha
thanks for another great chapter .. keep up the good work
cant wait for the next :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. The next chapter is coming soon. I'm just now finishing off the very last chapter (39) of this story (takes a while to get them up on the site). Thanks again for the feedback, Jenny
Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 05/02/12 0:57
Chapter: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising
Sorry to be so late in responding! The last two chapters are full of important information that 1) set up the storyline for more intrigue and possibility while 2) re-establishing Draco and Hermione's relationship. You have dangled a few carrots with Beline's absence and Tabor's refusal to believe Hermione is not interested in him. Great job!
Author's Response: You are a very engaged reader, which is great, but makes me wonder if some of my writing choices make things seem more important than they are meant to be. You'll see how all the loose ends get tied together in the next few chapters, and then you can let me know if I've lived up to your expectations. Thanks for the review! Jenny
Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 05/01/12 2:46
Chapter: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising
Although this seemed to be just a filler chapter while we wait for the plan with Goyle to go into action, I still enjoyed it : ) I can tell you are starting to set up the plot for the next story with Draco and Hermione's summer plans. I think they should transfer to the wizarding school in London. They could spend more time with Harry, Ginny, Luna, Neville, etc. and maybe everyone could accept Draco more. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see Hermione as Narcissa and hoping to see the protective side of Draco : )
Author's Response: You are right -- I am setting up the next story. No transfer plans, though -- but that's an interesting idea! The next chapter is coming soon. I'm not sure how protective Draco is in it. I tend to like Hermione in the brave heroine role! Thanks for another thoughtful review! --Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:11
Chapter: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising
I hope this goes off without a hitch! Wonderful chapter :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't promise no hiccups. Gotta keep it interesting! ;-) --Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:06
Chapter: Chapter 35: Plan of Attack
Yay! I cannot wait to see how this plan works out
Author's Response: My goodness -- you did a lot of reading in one day! Thank you for all your supportive comments after each chapter. I appreciate the positive feedback! :-) Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:00
Chapter: Chapter 34: Goyle's Tale
Very sweet chapter :-)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:55
Chapter: Chapter 33: Draco to the Rescue
Amazing chapter! I am really enjoying catching up on all the chapter updates I missed!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:51
Chapter: Chapter 32: Hermione and the Hag
Oh wow, Totally did not see that coming!!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:47
Chapter: Chapter 31: Navigating Being Alone
Love Ginny! I think she is one of the characters that comes across completely honest
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:42
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Separate Ways
Jeez What a jerk Draco is!!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:39
Chapter: Chapter 29: From Bad to Worse
This chapter made me kind of sad because of Draco and Hermione! Hope things start to get solved soon
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:30
Chapter: Chapter 28: Eavesdropping and Compromise
Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:26
Chapter: Chapter 27: Loyalties and Secrets
Oh dear... Cannot wait to see what Goyle is actually up to!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:17
Chapter: Chapter 26: Aurors Come Calling
Oh how the mysteries continue to pile up! I am loving every minute I spend reading this fic :-)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 23:09
Chapter: Chapter 25: "Official" Anniversary
Awww, Very sweet anniversary!!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/30/12 22:54
Chapter: Chapter 24: Engagement Party at the Burrow
Terrific chapter, I get the feeling that things are going to get crazier concerning the Dark Marks...
