Reviewer: RonaldLookALike
Date: 07/09/11 23:15
Chapter: Chapter 3: Week Two at S'Escombra Magica
you've done it once again! beutiful setting and detail of their day's i would just ask that you give a tiny bit more explanation as to why hermione got in trouble just a brief bit of detail into that would be nice ^^ other than that it was perfect keep up the spectacular work and please update soon ^^
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I think I left the part where Hermione gets in trouble a little vague on purpose, because she's in a foreign country where she doesn't understand the rules. The idea is that in Spain, you cannot cast a spell on a Muggle without good cause (and buying shoes doesn't qualify). I'm not sure how to add more detail, but I'll work on it. Thank you, Jenny
Reviewer: malfoysprincess99
Date: 07/09/11 21:38
Chapter: Chapter 3: Week Two at S'Escombra Magica
that was great when do you think the next chapter will be i love your stories :)
Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter is in the queue, Jenny
Reviewer: lax_punky97
Date: 07/09/11 10:46
Chapter: Chapter 3: Week Two at S'Escombra Magica
great chapter!! i am very excited to read the rest of the story! :) keep up the amazing work! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is already in the queue. :-) Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/09/11 10:14
Chapter: Chapter 3: Week Two at S'Escombra Magica
Loved it when Hermione got into trouble! :-) Great chapter, always excited to get the next update!
Author's Response: I had fun with that part! Thank you for your review, Jenny
Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 07/08/11 6:59
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
Okay, I think I might have given a review on this already, but I'm not sure. I just wanted to say that you are an amazing writer! You write out the characteristics and personalities of the characters perfectly! I really hope you continue to write on this story because the story line from the last on was great and I think this one will be equally surprising and fun if not surpassing. :) Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your high praise! I promise to finish this second story -- it's over half way done already (and looks to be a smidgen longer than the last one). Thank you, Jenny
Reviewer: panda_patronus
Date: 07/07/11 17:42
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
Good job! Like the story so far, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the rest of the story, Jenny
Reviewer: skheeb
Date: 07/07/11 11:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
I am really enjoying your writing and look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review, Jenny
Reviewer: RonaldLookALike
Date: 07/05/11 6:49
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
WOOT!!!i love your writing and check for it everyday ^^ please update again soon and also keep up the good work XD
Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. I'm glad you like my stories. The next chapter is already in the queue and should be approved any day now. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: mkgross11
Date: 07/03/11 18:07
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
im really loving this story. read the first one in one night! cant wait for the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback for both the first story and the sequel so far. I'm glad you like them! --Jenny
Reviewer: Hannah06
Date: 07/03/11 12:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
I was so excited to read the next chapter in this novel, great job! I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you like the sequel so far. Thank you for your nice review! Jenny
Reviewer: Dani2314
Date: 07/02/11 7:10
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
awesome chapter! i hope this story has a lot like this one!
Author's Response: There will be more, but I have to say, writing the smutty chapters makes me embarrassed! But I'll keep trying. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: aarati
Date: 07/01/11 18:01
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
Awe that was tooooo good loved it a lot...... :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. --Jenny
Reviewer: September December
Date: 06/30/11 15:21
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
I read DDTT on LiveJournal months ago and I honestly don't remember much but I did remember Draco inviting Hermione on this trip surprisingly so this was a really nice read. Can't wait for the next chapter update soon ;)
Author's Response: I'm having a hard time posting anything to LIveJournal these days, so it's best to come here to MuggleNet. I'm glad you remembered bits of the last story and enjoyed the new story. I'm a huge fan of continuity, so hopefully other things will reconnect you to the last story. The next chapter is in the queue, so you shouldn't have to wait long. Thank you! Jenny.
Reviewer: lax_punky97
Date: 06/30/11 11:08
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
i loved this chapter! it was lovely. keep up the great work, jenny! i look foreward to reading the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter and hope you like the next one (and those after that as well). Thank you! Jenny
Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/30/11 9:41
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
That was another great chapter. Can't wait to see what else you come up with. And the sexual situation was extreamly well done.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I have a hard time with the sex scenes, so I especially appreciate that you thought it was well done. Thank you! Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/30/11 5:44
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
Terrific chapter! I am so happy to be reading the sequel :-) Keep updating the story as often as you can!
Author's Response: I'm happy to see you are reading the sequel and enjoying it too!. The next chapter is in the queue. Thank you, Jenny
Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 06/30/11 2:02
Chapter: Chapter 2: Sa Platja de ses Bruixes
yay- it was worth the wait (:
i liked the descriptions of the beach and found it quite sweet with draco and hermione
how long until chapter 3- i'm addicted already!
Author's Response: It's in the queue, but the queue is long... I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. --Jenny
Reviewer: HP7 fan
Date: 06/26/11 9:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow
Awesome! Do more chapters I want to see how it ends.
Author's Response: Thanks! I posted Chapter 2 a long time ago. MuggleNet must be swamped with stories. Hopefully you'll get to read it soon! Thank you, Jenny
Reviewer: DVAlishangel
Date: 06/24/11 1:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow
oh my God you are such a wonderfull writter. I loved the story u built around D&H and the fact that you dont wonder 2 far off from J.K's world makes it even better. i hope harry accepts D&H relationship, wich im sure he will .either way ill be looking foward to the drama. thanx for the work you put into writing your storys for our enjoyment i just ask that you dont bail out on your fans like so many writers in this website do. looking foward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Never fear, I won't bail on this story. It's about 75% written already! I don't start posting until I'm at least half way done -- and the story is completely sketched out in my head. But, MuggleNet is a very busy story site, so sometimes it takes awhile to get a chapter approved. Hang in there, I promise you'll get the whole story eventually! Thank you, Jenny
Reviewer: guptadips
Date: 06/23/11 8:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow
Hey... I read your first story and that was awesome! you are a nice writer... hope to read the next chapter soon.. :) :D
Author's Response: I posted the next chapter a while ago, but it's taking some time to be approved. MuggleNet must be inundated with stories! Rest assured, most of the story is written, it just takes time to get it up on the site. Thanks for the nice review! Jenny
