Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/31/12 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 24: Engagement Party at the Burrow

I don't think we find out anything good from eavesdropping. We might find out something we didn't know but I think most of the time we hear things we don't want to know. Draco just made himself sad by hearing that Molly was like a mother to Hermione. Then he jumped to conclusions. In time, Narcissa might be a good mother figure to both Draco and Hermione.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/30/12 16:51
Chapter: Chapter 23: Goyle Brings Trouble

You have so many interesting things woven into this story--Nagini's progeny to interview and Death Eaters in pain over their Dark Marks. I'll be glad when Hermione figures this out and Draco feels better. Also intriguing is how everyone seems to know about Draco's Mark and how it bothers him.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/28/12 21:59
Chapter: Chapter 22: Vrasta Vultures vs. Quiberon Quafflepunchers

Viktor is always written as such a nice character. I like the sort of friendship he and Hermione seem to have. As always, Hermione is going to have this mystery figured out before her male colleagues do. :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/28/12 14:58
Chapter: Chapter 20: Spring Semester Begins

A House Elf named Cankle? Really?I wonder if Tabor will give up his pursuit of Hermione. And, I wonder if Goyle was one of the thieves at the Louvre. Despite the negative comments and looks, I think it was good for Draco and Hermione to go public.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/27/12 19:06
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Ghost in the Louvre

Well, I'm glad it was Theodore Nott, Sr. who was killed. That is one crazy ghost in the Louvre. I hope you explain why he only shows himself to Muggle women. He must fancy himself a ladies' man and think he's most impressive to Muggle women.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/27/12 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 19: Malfoy New Year's Eve Party

I know that was hard for both Draco and Hermione but I'm glad it happened. I liked that it seemed equally difficult for Draco to go public with the relationship. I guess I didn't think of that either. And, Yay, for Draco kissing Hermione in front of everybody.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/27/12 16:42
Chapter: Chapter 18: Skiing with the Grangers

Hermione--Listen to your mother! Dr. Granger is so right. I hope Hermione goes to Draco's party. She needs to humble herself. So what if there's a bit of teasing or outrage. You've made Draco into such a charming and wonderful boyfriend.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/25/12 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 17: Final Exams and Mistletoe

If Hermione let their relationship go public they wouldn't have these snogging issues at parties. I think that once Draco figures out skiing he'll be very good at it. And I think he will look great in ski clothes.

Reviewer: Rosewood
Date: 12/24/12 11:27
Chapter: Chapter 18: Skiing with the Grangers

wish there were more sexual situations !!!!!!! I just love your juicy sexual situations very much !!

Reviewer: Rosewood
Date: 12/24/12 3:44
Chapter: Chapter 4: Muggle Fashion Show

It's alright even if you wrote wrong dates because this is really YOUR story .

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/17/12 14:54
Chapter: Chapter 16: Dark Mark Distress

That sounds wonderful--a morning spent in a greenhouse. I can't think of anything more relaxing. I think the salve Draco got is probably just a band-aid.I hope Hermione figures out what's really causing the pain. It seems Draco has a change of attitude toward Hermione when his Dark Mark starts hurting.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/12/12 15:02
Chapter: Chapter 15: Potions Envy

I guess there's not much for Hermione to say since she's the one who doesn't want the relationship to go public. At the same time Draco could encourage someone else without really meaning to. Although the fact that someone's in a relationship won't stop others from flirting with them anyway. Do I sense trouble between Ron and Lav?

Author's Response: Glad to see you are moving along through the second story. I hope it keeps your interest! And yes, there is trouble ahead for lots of folks in this story. :-) Thanks for the review, Jenny

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/11/12 15:52
Chapter: Chapter 14: Rivals and Jealousy

It's a bit disconcerting to know that someone was hidden and spying on you even if it is your boyfriend. I was afraid Draco and Hermione were going to get into a big fight. That they didn't shows what a sense of humor can do--it can make the bad things seem funny and good.

Reviewer: FlameNox
Date: 12/07/12 15:11
Chapter: Chapter 19: Malfoy New Year's Eve Party

Your story is freaking amazing. I love that Harry's talking about speaking to snakes like its normal; but I do have one point to raise--I'm not so sure that Harry would be able to speak parsletongue after the horcrux inside him was destroyed--that bit of Voldemort had all his powers which of course included that skill and Harry put it to good use-but post-war I'm not sure if he'd be able to do it anymore.
Just a thought.

Author's Response: Interesting thought! I hadn't thought about it like that. But for this story, Harry will have to keep speaking to snakes. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the feedback, Jenny

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/04/12 16:32
Chapter: Chapter 13: Holyhead Harpies versus Quiberon Quafflepunchers

I don't know if I could study as much as Hermione does. I was a good student but didn't go that overboard as to study when I had another event going on. My favorite parts of this chapter were when an old witch was flying around Muggle areas and frightening people:D and when Harry had interviewed a snake. I wonder if the old witch incident is related to the Muggle death by dark magic.

Author's Response: Nobody studies as much as Hermione! Ha! And you'll just have to keep reading to see how all the bits and pieces of the story fit together. Thanks for all your feedback, Jenny

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/27/12 17:08
Chapter: Chapter 12:Hermione's Birthday

It sounds like Hermione had a wonderful birthday. The food sounded yummy. I liked Draco's finale. I'll bet that Draco gets invitations to social clubs because he's a pure-blood and Hermione won't get any. Too bad if WUP won't let her parents visit. Some places are so elitist.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/19/12 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 11: Classes Begin

The French are sounding a little ethnocentric by providing little in the way of other cultures or the magic associated with those cultures. After taking classes with Binns, Hermione should be an expert on the Goblin Wars. She and Draco seem to be developing their own friends. Hopefully they'll still be able to spend adequate time together.

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 11/18/12 18:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

Smugglers, prejudice and romance aplenty, oh my!
I have to say, I was a faithful reader of the first installment and I even started reading this sequel but then real life got in the middle... However, it afforded me the possibility of reading it all again and the completed version! And as in the first one, you had me entranced! I love the depth of the background information you use! You must research a lot! : D
I think I've said this before but I love the way you portray Ginny. I think that in the books she sometimes comes across as too forceful and almost "stalkerish" (pardon me my French)...
Well, I'm just happy to be able to read writings of such quality. I think it's becoming rarer and rarer in the Fanfiction world.

Thank you for an amazing read! I look forward for the sequel.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/15/12 17:22
Chapter: Chapter 10: Moving into the WUP Dormitories

It's too bad Hermione won't just let her relationship with Draco go public. I guess the Malfoy name might be just too familiar even in France. But if Draco isn't afraid for people to know, Hermione shouldn't worry about it too much. I can see she'll be fighting the girls off for Draco's attention.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 11/07/12 12:20
Chapter: Chapter 9: Wizarding University of Paris Orientation

I think it's always hard to attend mixers when you're first starting school. Draco and Hermione may have an especially difficult time since they have each other and have an excuse not to meet anyone new. I also sensed a bit of 'darkness' in the things they saw in Paris. Although, they don't have Voldemort hanging around so it doesn't seem that dark.

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