Reviewer: RideTheLightning
Date: 03/11/12 9:59
Chapter: Chapter 28: Eavesdropping and Compromise

another great chapter! love this story so much - its got a good pace so it doesn't feel rushed but still keeps a excellent plot to keep you reading - looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. The next chapter is with my beta. I'll post it just as soon as I get it back. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: Weaselgirl
Date: 03/10/12 12:00
Chapter: Chapter 27: Loyalties and Secrets

OMG WHY DID YOU STOP THE CHAPTER HERE?????????? WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: The next chapter is with my beta. I'll post it just as soon as I can. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: googirl97
Date: 03/06/12 1:45
Chapter: Chapter 27: Loyalties and Secrets

What a great chapter! I like how realistic their fight was but am devastated that this has happened so near the end of the story. Please tell me that you are going to write a third!!!!

Author's Response: Yes, I'm going to write a third, and this story is going to be longer than the first one. I promise a happy ending here! Thank you for your review, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 03/04/12 0:43
Chapter: Chapter 27: Loyalties and Secrets

Oh no : ( That was a very sad chapter but I'm actually okay with it. It was inevitable that this fight would happen between Draco and Hermione. I do wish Hermione would have actually voiced her thoughts about wanting to know about Goyle because she didn't want Draco to be hurt with is involvement. I hope that they are able to work things out. I can see both sides of the argument but I am definitely siding more with Hermione here...Hope to see another new chapter soon : )

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad you are okay with things so far. What's a story without some drama, eh? First we're getting some relationship drama, but soon we'll have action-style drama too. I hope you like it! --Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 02/29/12 3:00
Chapter: Chapter 26: Aurors Come Calling

I am so excited to see an update but again I was kind of disappointed by the lack of romance in this chapter. I hope the sparks come back to our young couple soon and that they make spending time together a high priority. Interested to see what Goyle is up to...and Draco better not be involved. Nice twist about Ron in there though...keep it up!

Author's Response: You are going to have to bear with me as Draco and Hermione go through a rocky time. I do promise a happy ending, though, if that helps. Thank you for your review, Jenny

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 02/28/12 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 26: Aurors Come Calling

Typical university goings-on sprinkled with a dash of mystery and subterfuge? Wonderful!!! Do I detect a hint of future missteps with Draco and Hermione as well? I am curious as to how you will resolve Draco's involvement with Goyle and Hermione's duplicity. Please, please do not skim over the plotline and simplify the outcome: develop your storyline as complex and thorough as you can! Good luck!

Author's Response: I'm trying to develop the story fully, but there are a lot of moving pieces! Some issues are going to be longer term. I hope you are satisfied with the way I've plotted things out for the rest of this story, and hopefully you'll stick with me through story # 3 as well. Thank you for your thoughtful review, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan
Date: 02/26/12 9:22
Chapter: Chapter 25: "Official" Anniversary

i love what draco did with the flowers

Author's Response: Thank you! I had so much fun coming up with a cool spell for Draco and I'm thrilled someone appreciated it. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 02/20/12 4:13
Chapter: Chapter 25: "Official" Anniversary

LOVE this chapter : ) Even though much wasn't accomplished with the plot, it was nice to see Draco and Hermione celebrate what Draco considers their 1st anniversary. I was a little surprised though because Hermione didn't seem that swept away by the evening. I thought there would be talk or thoughts about everything they went through during their 1st year and how close they have become. Great job with this story. Definitely still my fave Dramione fic of all time, keep it up : )

Author's Response: I probably should have had Hermione be more swept away. Sorry about that. I guess I didn't want to go too over the top, because Goyle is in the background now, making things uncomfortable. Be patient going forward -- I promise a happy ending, okay? Thanks for your thoughtful feedback, Jenny

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 02/20/12 3:06
Chapter: Chapter 25: "Official" Anniversary

Loved all of the updates! Very interested to see how the snake theory plays out!

Author's Response: I've already posted the next chapter, so things are moving right along. Thank you for your review, Jenny

Reviewer: lilit829
Date: 02/13/12 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 24: Engagement Party at the Burrow

Omg! I can't cant wait 4 the next chapter! I'm hooked!

Author's Response: Great! I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying the story. I'll post the next chapter just as soon as I get it back from my beta. Thank you! Jenny

Reviewer: aarati
Date: 02/12/12 10:30
Chapter: Chapter 24: Engagement Party at the Burrow

Amazing chapter but so poor of there relationship no one is accepting & i hope goyle is doing nothing bad which would put draco in danger

Author's Response: It can't all be smooth sailing, right? There has to be some drama. :-) I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you, Jenny

Reviewer: googirl97
Date: 02/10/12 23:42
Chapter: Chapter 24: Engagement Party at the Burrow

I like your stories very much and have been following them for a while now. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. I'm happy to hear you are enjoying my stories. Thanks! Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 02/10/12 12:35
Chapter: Chapter 24: Engagement Party at the Burrow

I fall more and more in love with this story with each chapter! I hope Draco doesn't get any thoughts in his head that breaking up with Hermione would be the best thing for her, because it definitely would not! So happy for Harry and Ginny : ) I hope we get to see the wedding in your fic. If my memory serves me right, Draco and Hermione's 1 year anniversary is fastly approaching...can't wait to see what you do with that! Also interested to see the connection with Draco's Dark Mark pain and everything that is going on. Keep it up : )

Author's Response: I have to warn you that I'm saving the wedding for the third story. There's so much I have to bring together in this story that I can't see fitting it in here. In fact, there are a number of things I'm saving for a third story, which is making my commitment to continuing ever stronger. Thank you for your thoughtful and kind review. And you are right, the anniversary is coming up soon -- good memory! Thank you, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan
Date: 02/10/12 6:03
Chapter: Chapter 24: Engagement Party at the Burrow

great chapter :) thankyou

Author's Response: You're welcome. Thank you for the positive feedback! --Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 02/05/12 3:16
Chapter: Chapter 23: Goyle Brings Trouble

Yeah for updates!!! I absolutely agree with Hermione...Goyle should not be has bad written all over it! I really want to know how the professor and healer knew all abour Draco's condition...and how the healer knew Hermione?? Hmmm...interesting...more please : )

Author's Response: I've got a lot of moving pieces in this story right now. I'm glad you are intrigued! I'm working hard to tie it all together going forward. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: silverdoe98
Date: 01/30/12 20:29
Chapter: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

i loved your first story, can't wait to finish this one!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it. There's a new chapter that's been posted for a while now. Hopefully the mods will approve it soon so that we can keep moving along with this story. It's almost completely written at this point. Thank you, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 01/29/12 1:04
Chapter: Chapter 22: Vrasta Vultures vs. Quiberon Quafflepunchers

I am so sad that there are no more chapters posted : ( I have been hooked to the story, and its prequel, for the past week or so and I can't wait for more! I am so happy to see that Draco and Hermione's relationship is public and Harry, Ginny and Viktor seem to accepting of Draco. How many more chapters left?? I hope there is a 3rd story...yeah for a Dramione trilogy! I am addicted to this story, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I posted a chapter a while ago, but I think there's been some glitches with the site. I'm sure the mods will approve it soon. The good news is the story is almost completely written, so it's just a matter of getting it all moving along here. Thank you for your nice review (and I'm leaving some things open in this story to set up a third, so eventually I'll get there). Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 01/23/12 4:11
Chapter: Chapter 22: Vrasta Vultures vs. Quiberon Quafflepunchers

Great updates! Very interested to see how the probable horcrux plays out!

Author's Response: I'm glad that storyline caught your interest. Thank you for your review, Jenny

Reviewer: mirandacross1
Date: 01/21/12 23:30
Chapter: Chapter 22: Vrasta Vultures vs. Quiberon Quafflepunchers

This story and the first in the series are both incredibly well written and totally addictive. I have a policy not to read stories until they're complete because I'm way too impatient. However, I had to make an exception for this story after I finished the first one yesterday. Good job on your writing and I can't wait to see where you take the story.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you are enjoying my stories. I have most of the story written already, so hopefully I won't keep you too frustrated for too long! Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan
Date: 01/20/12 3:06
Chapter: Chapter 22: Vrasta Vultures vs. Quiberon Quafflepunchers

a really nice chapter .. keep up the good work. i wonder who the theives are and why belphegor dosent like wizards . thankyou =)

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you are curious about the plot points I'm working on. Thank you for your review, Jenny

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