Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 06/11/11 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 1-Love

Not bad. Some of the rhymes were a bit of a stretch, but the emotion was good.

Author's Response: thank you.I know the rhymes are a bit of a stretch,as you said it,but well i can't be perfect at everything,especially poems! :) Actually this was my first time and I am a little new at this so don't judge me too harshly...but thnx to your opinions next time maybe i'll do better!Thank you for saying that the emotion was good,i was really trying to make James Potter more sensitive.hope that worked!=)

Reviewer: LILY_ISTHEBEST
Date: 06/08/11 10:21
Chapter: Chapter 1-Love

I should say that it's so romantic and heart warming that i would have thought it was impossible for james potter to write such sensitive things! It's really sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you and it means a lot to me that you reviewed because i love your stories!

Reviewer: Evangeline_DeMore
Date: 06/07/11 16:17
Chapter: Chapter 1-Love

I like it but I don't get the sixth seventh year rating. Great job.

Author's Response: thank you for noticing my careless mistake and thank you for you wonderful review!!!:)

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