Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 11/23/12 16:52
Chapter: A Typical Day in the Weasley House

This was very sweet! I rather enjoyed the simplicity of it. Go Weasleys! The only thing that I thought could be changed was the stanza that mentioned Molly was alone again and wanted school to begin. I think here would be a good place to add some details about Molly feeling overwhelmed by so many kids, but still, she loves them. Also, the way it was worded seemed odd. If Molly is alone, wouldn't she want her kids to be with her so she doesn't feel alone? I realize this isn't what you meant, so you just need to make it a little clearer. Other than that, this was a fun poem to read! It's nice to see that not all poems are dark and dreary. (I only say that because mine are sort of dark and dreary...) Great job! :) ~Nagini Riddle

Reviewer: Snidgetgirl
Date: 06/01/12 0:14
Chapter: A Typical Day in the Weasley House

This is soooooo Mrs. Weasley!

Author's Response: Haha! I thought that it just really got into her mind, didn't it? I'm glad that you liked it! :)

Reviewer: canufeelthemagictonight
Date: 09/24/11 7:40
Chapter: A Typical Day in the Weasley House

This is a really great poem. It's nice the way you showed how much Molly Weasley loved her children. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am very glad that you enjoyed it enough to respond to the writing. I really enjoyed writing this, and I am glad that you liked it! Thank you so much for reading!

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