LOVE IT NOW FINISH IT~!!! pleeeeeeeezzzze
it was very good. You can describe things well, which unfortunately, I lack.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) And I'm sure you'll get better at describing things. It's not so much as a talent, as it is a skill developed from lots and lots of writing practice. Good luck with your writing! -- Sara
Ooooh, did Draco slip her the love potion? And why would he do it, if it was him? Hmmmmm...
I'm really interested to see where you're going to take this story- my only advice would be to take your time with the plot; no need to rush through any action, enjoy it, let it simmer in our brains!
Good job- looking forward to the next chapter!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I do actually have a lot of this story plotted out, but I'm taking my time and making sure the plot isn't cliched, flows, and makes sense. -- Sara