Reviews For Broken
Reviewer: Larlinn
Date: 06/09/11 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

LOVE IT NOW FINISH IT~!!! pleeeeeeeezzzze

Reviewer: whyyesiamamuggle
Date: 06/04/11 15:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

it was very good. You can describe things well, which unfortunately, I lack.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) And I'm sure you'll get better at describing things. It's not so much as a talent, as it is a skill developed from lots and lots of writing practice. Good luck with your writing! -- Sara

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 06/04/11 15:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooooh, did Draco slip her the love potion? And why would he do it, if it was him? Hmmmmm...

I'm really interested to see where you're going to take this story- my only advice would be to take your time with the plot; no need to rush through any action, enjoy it, let it simmer in our brains!

Good job- looking forward to the next chapter!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I do actually have a lot of this story plotted out, but I'm taking my time and making sure the plot isn't cliched, flows, and makes sense. -- Sara

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